描写城市的英语作文_《描写地点的英语作文》18200字

作文一:《描写地点的英语作文》18200字

Writing:描写地方类作文 介绍地理位置的说明文,它的写作顺序建议如下:  地面气城著(地名)

应介绍这个地方的地(地理位置).面(面积,人口),气(气候状况),城(两个著名城市),著(与众不同之处)

写说明文,时态以现在时为主,人称以第三人称为主。

地点表达的常用句型要记好。如:

1.地点状语+,+主句 /(历史) (分词结构做状语)

 Located in…, ×××is a city…with a history of…

 ...lies near\behind\in front of\by the side of...\between\among...

 With sp. on/to the east/west/north\ …borders … to the south\ west\east\south e.g. China, located/ lying in the east of Asia, is one of largest countries in the world, with/bordering Japan to the east and Russia on the north.

2.面积+人口 (with结构做定语)

…covers/takes up a total area of …with a population of ….

… is a city with a population of…

e.g. (1) Beijing, the capital of China, is a large city with a population of over 12,000,000.

(2) Our school, which takes up 63 thousand square kilometers, is very large in size.

3.气候特征(注意表示天气变化的形容词)

 It is warm all the seasons (warm, dry, cold,sunny, rainy…)四季温暖。

 it's like spring all the year round. 四季如春。

 People in sp. can enjoy typical tropical cimate(典型的热带气候), which is so pleasan that every year, many tourists e here to enjoy the beautiful scenery, among which…is the most popular.

 The average temperature ranges between 23℃ and 39℃.

 5.著名特殊之处

 The special character of ××× is attracting more and more tourists from all over the world.

e.g. Guangzhou is rich in traveling resources, such as the famous “eight scenery of YangCheng”.

常见描写地点的篇章模板

a)

b) ×××lies in the southwest of ...

c) It covers/has a total area of 7,686,850 square kilometers with a population of

2.8million

d) It is warm (dry, cold,sunny,rainy...)

e) Because×××  is famous for/ is well known for …, the tourists from all over the f) The special character of ××× is attracting more and more tourists from all over the world.

g) It has many world-famous places of interest, such as... and....

1.介绍地理位置(Location)

be located in…/be situated in…/lie in…

坐落于……脚下/顶部 …stands at the foot of/ on the top of…

stretches itself lazily along沿着…悠闲地伸展开来

eg:Rio, Brazil's second largest city, stretches itself lazily along the coast of the Atlantic ocean。 福建省位于中国的东南部。 学校的南边有一条铁路。 山顶有一座庙。 教学楼坐落于校园的后面。 上海建在中国东海岸一组岛屿上,在这,数条河流注入海洋。

Shanghai is built on a group of islands  on the east coast of China at a point where

several rivers flow into the ocean.

 to the east/west/south/north of ,opposite ,around/ across, in front of ,behind

1.There is a man-made pond  in front of___ the main building.

2.To the north of_ the main building, there is a meeting hall.

3.Opposite___ the meeting hall is the library.

4.There  5. Trees are planted __around the lawn.

6. Also behind the main building, __across___ the lawn, there is a tall laboratory building.

2.介绍人口(Population)

…has a population of…,

(a city) with a population of…

• eighty percent of the population … are …

• The population of …has grown to…

Eg:Beijing, the capital of China, is a large city with a population of over 12,000,000.

北京是中国的首都,是一个有1200多万人口的大城市。

3.面积

has/covers an area of…square kilometers

(a city) with an area of…square kilometers

take up,/the size of our city is …

Eg:Our school , which takes up 63 thousand square kilometers, is very large in size.  周边环境)1) stands,

2) surrounded by,    3) faces…

4)with…on its east/west/left/right

5))at the back of在……的后面

6)in front of在……的前面

7)in the north of在……的北部(内部)

8)on the south of在……的南方(接壤)

9)to the east of在……的东面(相离)

Eg:1. West of the city stands a tall building.

• 2. Surrounded by mountains on three sides, the small village faces a clear river

on the east.

4.历史

…has a long history (of …years)

with a long history (of …years)

… has witnessed too much ing and going in history

Eg:1. Egypt is an Arabian country with a long history.

• 2. Built in the16th century, the castle has witnessed too much ing and going

in history

它是一个具有悠久历史的现代化城市。It is a modern city with a long history. 这个城市有1000多年历史。 这座有1000多年历史的城市是我们的骄傲。

more than 1000 years from 1000 to 2006.这本书涉及了从1000年到2006年的1000多年的历史。

5.交通

交通便利…has convenient transportation

(a city) with convenient transportation both on land and water

坐汽车、火车、飞机到…take a bus, a train or a plane to/go to …by bus/train/plane

6.经济

经济迅速发展

…economy has been developing rapidly

多次进入全国经济十强城市

…has been listed among the top ten strongest cities in economy several times

7.名胜古迹(places of interest/ historical spots)

The places around our city are rich in travelling/natural resources.

2)The city, known as…, attracts millions of visitors from all over the world.

3)The city is well-known / famous  for its…/as…

5) … is a must-see for tourists, as…

承德是全国24个历史文化名城之一,也是44个风景名胜之一。

Chengde City is not only one of the well-known 24 historical and cultural cities but also one of the 44 major scenic spots in China.

8.气候特征

1. There is a variety of climate ( warm, dry, humid, cold, sunny, stomy, rainy…)

2. The average temperature of Hong Kong is about 220C . The rainy season is between May and July.

9.……发生了很大变化great changes have taken place…

特色鲜明的地方文化distinct local culture

海岸线总长……公里Its coastline has a total length of …kilometers. .这一地区是多种野花的家园。 曾经的“鱼米之乡”不复存在。 落基山脉中有熊生长。

The countryside in the north 北方的乡下适宜这些水果的生长。 milk and honey.这个地方有“鱼米之乡”的美誉。

表示变化的句子有:

1. In the past, there used to be…, but now…

2. With time passing by,/going on

As time t on/goes on

3.With the development of agriculture and industry,…

4.  Green grass and trees can be seen everywhere now.

5.  Those small and low houses have been replaced by tall buildings.

6.  Great changes have taken place in my village in the past ten years.

7.  What great changes we have!

8.  The villagers are really satisfied with their lives now.

表示对比的短语/句子:while, but, however

on the contrary/in contrast,

on the one hand, on the other hand

used to do ( there used to be…)

no longer…--- not any longer

表达对比和变化的经典句型:

1 过去父母们主要通过写信彼此联系, 但是现在我们可以在家打长途电话。   my parents contacted others mainly by sending letters,  we call long distance at home.

2.过去我们甚至在周末还要上课。

We  have to attend classes even at weekends

3.现在我不再熬夜,大约10点睡觉。

 change, improve, bee, turn into

1.In a word, things have begun to  since last year.

2.In short, have brought us fort and convenience.

3.By 2008, Beijing will have bee a beautiful, modern and international city.

4.The old houses in the central part of the city will be turned into new shopping centers.

10.something  special 特色

1)(The place) is famous for…../ The special character of ( the place) is ….

2)You can go on the city tours to enjoy the sights, taste the local  food, explore the lively nightlife and learn about its history and  culture.

3) Wherever you go, there are plenty of activities to choose from

11.词汇:

1.地理geography    2.古迹historical spot   7.方言 dialect ___

9.城市的,城镇的_ urban   10.当地的,地方的__ local

11.本土的,本国的native   12.矿藏,矿物质mineral_

13.太平洋_Pacific Ocean    14.大西洋_Atlantic Ocean_

15.东南方的_southeastern_    16.西北方的northwestern

1.城市规划urban planning    2.城镇人口urban population

3.追溯到 date back to    4.以„„为背景 be set in

5.独有的特色 unique features

1.

Antarctica,which is covered with cold thick ice and deep snow all (the) year round,

is the coldest continent in the world.

Antarctica, the coldest continent in the world, is covered  with cold thick ice and deep snow all year round.

2.我的家乡位于中国广东,My hometown,neighboring Hong Kong,is located in Guangdong Province of China.

3. 广州,别名花城,地处珠江三角洲(the Peal River Delta)北部,临近港澳。

The city of Guangzhou, nicknamed as Flower City, is located in the north of the Peal River Delta, close to Hongkong and Macao

4.广州是广东省的政治经济文化中心.

Guangzhou is the political, economic and cultural centre of Guangdong Province.

5.各地气候差异很大

The climate differs sharply from one area to another.

6.澳大利亚拥有极为丰富的矿产资源,且铁矿储量居世界第二。

Australia has pretty rich mineral resources, and its iron resource ranks 2nd in the world.

1.西山镇依山傍水。过去,这里的人们生活极其贫困。解放后人们的生活在各方面都

Xishan town is a small town, is located at the foot of a mountain of North Guangdong province and in front of it flows a big riverhas a population of about 100,000 covers an area of about 126 square kilometers. Before liberation, people there lived a hard life great changes have taken place since liberation many factories, shops, hospitals and schools have been built/set up. , before liberation there was only one school for children from wealthy families, but now there are 10 schools and every child can go to school. After work, people go shopping, see films, go dancing and have sports .

2.汕尾市位于广东省东部,是一个有很长历史的沿海城市。总面积5271平方千米,总人口359.23万人。东临汕头,西接惠州市、深圳、东莞市、广州市,素有“粤东桥梁”之称。汕尾自然资源如矿产、森林、农产品等非常丰富,气候宜人,冬不寒冷,夏不酷热。汕尾市著名的旅游胜地如凤山祖庙Fengshan Temple旅游景区红海湾旅游景区等,每年都吸引大量游客。

Located in the east of Guangdong province, Shanwei is a coastal city with a long history. It covers a total area of 5271 square kilometers with a population of about 240 thousand. With Shantou on its east and Huizhou, Shenzhen, Dongguan, Guangzhou on its west , Shanwei is also called the “bridge of eastern Guangdong”. The climate here is pleasant, neither too hot in summer nor too cold in winter and it is rich in natural resources, such as mine, forest, farm produce and so on. There are many famous places of interest, among which is the

Fengshan Temple, Red Bay whose scenery is very beautiful, attracts lots of tourists from different places every year.

3.澳大利亚位于最小的大洲—大洋洲,是世界第六大国家。它是一个干旱气候为主的国家,只有少部分沿海地区有充足的雨量。它由六个州组成,其中墨尔本和悉尼是最大的两个城市。它以明媚的阳光,数不清的牛羊和奇特的野生动植物而著名,世界各地的游客来到这里体验它独特的美景。 总面积:7,686,850km2 人口:约:2,000万  —Oceania, Australia is the sixth largest country in the world. It covers a total area of7,686,850square kilometers with a population of about 20 million. It is a mainly dry country and only a few coastal areas have plenty of rainfall.  , It is made up of 6 states, in which Melbourne and Sydney are the largest cities. Because it is famous for its bright sunshine, countless sheep and cattle and its unique wildlife, the tourists from all over the world e to enjoy its scenery.

4.

1. 中国位于亚洲大陆的东部、太平洋西岸,陆地面积约960万平方公里。

2. 从南到北,从东到西,距离都在5000公里以上。

3. 大陆海岸线长约1.8万公里。

4. 风景名胜区的资源是以自然资源为主的、独特的、不可替代的景观资源。

5. 经过几亿年大自然的鬼斧神工,形成了许多自然遗产,而且世代不断增值。

6. 许多地方被评为世界文化遗产并得到合理的开发和保护。

China lies in the east of the Asian Land and on the west bank of the Pacific Ocean ,with an area of about 960 square kilometers. It is more than 5000 kilometers in distance both from north to south and from west to east while the coastal line covers as long as 18 thousand kilometers. The resources in the places of interest are mainly natural-born, some of which are unique and irreplaceable landscapes. After thousands and thousands of years of magic work by nature,many natural heritages have e into being and have bee more valuable with time.  And besides, many places of interest have been entitled the world cultural heritages and fortunately some of them have been well developed and properly preserved

5.介绍广东

假如你是一名导游, 你将带领一个外国旅游团游览广东省。请用英语写一个发言稿,简介广东。

1. 广东省位于中国大陆最南部,南临南海,海岸线总长3368公里,岛屿众多。

2. 广东省历史悠久,简称粤。

3. 广东素有水果王国之称, 香蕉、甘蔗、荔枝、菠萝是其中的四大名果。

4. 广东是华南工业发达之省,水陆交通便利,海运发达

5. 其中,经济特区有深圳、珠海、汕头等。

6. 广东省有“食在广东”的美称。.

参考词汇: 海岸线coastline; 甘蔗sugar cane;荔枝lychee; 菠萝pineapple

经济特区special economic zones

Ladies and Gentlemen,

Wele to Guangdong Province. I’m Wang Qian. And I’m more than glad to be your guide. Guangdong Province, also called Yue for short, has a long history and is known for the saying, “Don’t hesitate to have meals here.” Located by the South Sea in the southeast part of mainland China, it has quite a few islands off its coastline, which has a total length of 3,368 kilometres. Known as a fruit king, Guangdong Province is famous for its high-quality bananas, sugar cane, lychees and pineapples. It is also one of the most developed industrial provinces in South China, with convenient transportation both on land and water. It has several special economic zones such as Shenzhen, Zhuhai, Shantou and so on.

Finally, I sincerely hope every one of you will enjoy yourself here.

参考的词汇:总督府:Governor House;  叹息桥: Sign Bridge;

Venice, located in the northeast of Italy, is the main port city of Italy. It has a population of nearly 70,000. The history of the city goes back over 700 years when a group of refugees settled on a small island earliest. Venice has many famous tourist attractions, such as Grand Canal, Governor House, and Sign Bridge and so on. The city is surrounded by sea so it is called “the city on water”.

7.请写100个词左右的短文,介绍你的祖国---中国

要点如下:

•   中国具有悠久的历史和文化

•   地理位置、面积和人口情况

•   美丽的山川。长江是世界上最长的河流之一,长城是

世界七大奇观之一

•   人民勤劳勇敢。他们的勤奋和智慧在过去的二十年里

给中国带来了巨大的变化

My motherland---China is a great country with a long history and rich culture. It lies in the east of Asia, with an area of 9,600,000 square kilometers and a population of 1.3 billion. Beijing is her capital. There are many beautiful mountains and rivers, as well as rich nature resources in China. The Changjiang River, as we all know, is  among the longest rivers in the world, and the

Great Wall is one of the seven wonders on the earth.The Chinese people are hard-working and brave people.Their hardwork and wisdom have brought great changes in China in the past 20 years

8.鸟巢是一个国家露天体育馆,位于北京的北部。拥有面积258,000平方千米,能够容纳90,000人。  竣工时间:2003年12月—2008年

用途:奥运会期间可举办田径,足球比赛

奥运会后可用于举办各种大型活动

外观: 犹如树枝搭成的鸟巢

专家评价:奥运史上一个难以置信的标志性建筑物。

, which Beijing, is a national stadium 258,000 square kilometers. It is able to hold more than 90 thousand people.

matches during the Beijing Olympic Games. After that it can be used to activities.

Seen from the outside, it looks like came from. No wonder experts regard it as an incredible symble for Olympic history.

本次段考作文赏析:

Sample 1: I’d like to tell you something about our city. You’ve made the wise choice to travel here.Nanjing, the capital of Jiangsu years, and was once the capital of ten dynasties. **It is a very beautiful city with a lot of places of emple and the Stone City. It also has many modern factories and high buildings.

Thank you.

Sample 2: Nanjing, the capital city of Jiangsu Province, which is located in the southeast of the capital city of ten dynasties in the history, like Lake, the Jiming Tand abroad. Bisides, many modern factories and high buildings are seen everywhere. **  Most people can enjoy the pleasant climate all the year around and the convenient transportation available can make you enjoy the beautiful scenery in the city easily.

of China and the southwest of China. It about 2.8 million, more than 1.2 million square kilometers. The capital city is Lhasa, which “The highest city” in the world. more than 700 years, Tibet has a number of world-famous places of interest, such as the Potala Palace. it politics, economy and culture.

10.介绍广州

1. 广州位于广东省的中部,屹立在珠江边上屹立在珠江边上屹立在珠江边上屹立在珠江边上,毗邻港澳。如此地理优势让广州获得中国南大门的美誉。

2. 广州历史悠久,很多古迹如:镇海楼,中山纪念堂和南越王墓等都见证了州2000多年的历史。

3. 如今广州依然保存着它的传统,同时也加入了很多现代的元素,从上下九路和北京路,你总能找到值得带回家的东西

4. 粤菜是中国八大菜系之一,来到广州一定要试试,这里有你听都没听过的材料与味道 .

5. 广州的交通非常方便,这里有飞机,船,火车和汽车通往全国乃至全世界各地

Guangzhou, the South Gate of China, is a prosperous city on the Pearl River. Guangzhou is located in the middle south of Guangdong Province, close to the South China Sea, Hong Kong, and Macau. Rich in history, Guangzhou is home to many cultural relics: the Western Han Nanyue King's Tomb Museum, the Zhenhai Tower and the Sun Yat-sen Memorial Hall all tell us the 2,000-year history of Guangzhou. Today, Guangzhou retains its ancient customs, but is also a large city full of vigor and current fashions. You can find something worth taking home in Shangxia Jiu Lu, Beijing Lu and Di Shi Fu Lu. Trying Yue Cai (Cantonese Cuisine), one of eight Chinese famous cuisines, is definitely a must in Guangzhou! Eat delicious food with ingredients you have never heard of. Transportation in Guangzhou is more and more convenient. With plane, train, ship or bus to choose, you can reach any corner of the world from here.

1. Bristol is a truly beautiful,interesting and fascinating city.Beautiful parks and gardens leak onto interesting lanes and footpaths,while houses and buildings of old times stand magnificently on the hills of the city.

But Bristol is much more than this;it is a modern city where the latest works in contemporary arts can be found and where the night-life is interesting and varied.

Bristol is surrounded by beautiful countryside,rolling hills,and top class holiday resorts.Some of the country’s most fascinating tourist

attractions-castles and palaces-are only a short drive away.

Bristol has always envouraged the tourist industry and weled tourist from all parts of the world.There is a superb choice of amodation available and the city is proud of its many restaurants and cafes.

布里斯托尔的确是一座非常美丽、有趣和迷人的城市。美丽的公园和花园 里到处是趣味盎然的路径,旧时代的房屋和建筑昂然挺立在城市的山坡上。然而,布里斯托尔并非仅仅如此;那还是座现代化的城市,有当代艺术的最新作品,也有 有趣和丰富多样的夜生活。布里斯托尔的四周有美丽的乡村,起伏不断的山地,以及一流的度假胜地。从这里出发到一些全国最迷人的旅游景点,如城堡和宫殿,只 有短短的一段车程。布里斯托尔一向重视旅游业,欢迎来自世界各地的游客。当地有一流的住宿可供选择,还有其引以为豪的众多餐馆和咖啡馆。

2. 上海既是一座历史文化名城,也是当今中国最为繁荣的经济中心之一,成为人们向往的观光胜地。上海为旅游者在各方面提供了良好的基础设施。在上海旅游,不仅 方便愉快,而且安全舒适。上海要长久吸引旅游者,就应该切实做好各项旅游服务工作,让游客获得宾至如归的服务。我们希望而且相信,上海会使每一位旅游者流 连忘返,“乐不思蜀”,给每一位旅游者留下了美好的回忆。

Shanghai,a famous historical and cultural city,and one of the most

prosperous economic centers in China,has bee a famous scenic spot that people look forward to visiting.

Shanghai provides tourists with a good infrastructure in every

aspect.Touring in Shanghai is not only convenient and pleasant,but also safe and fortable.

To maintain a lasting charm for tourists,Shanghai should earnestly do a good job in all kinds of tourist services to make them feel at home.

We hope and believe that Shanghai will make every tourist stay a longer time and bee too delighted to be homesick.A nice memory of the city will linger in the heart of every tourist.

3. 阳朔是个小镇,人口不足三万。它极富盛名,每年有成千上万的游客趋之若骛,从世界各地涌来。1998年美国前总统比尔.克林顿来到这里,面对美不胜收的景 致,

不忍匆匆离去,以致推迟其香港之行。阳朔最吸引人的地方就是板石街,又名“西洋街”。该街总长一千米,有一千四百一十年历史。街道两旁有数百家商店, 主要出售外国人喜欢的仿古制品和纪念品。徜徉小街,游人会惊喜地发现在这里东西方文明是如此的水乳交融。

Yangshuo is a small country of less than 30,000 people.Nevertheless,it is so famous that it woos thousands of tourists worldwide all the year round.    In 1998,former US president Bill Clinton came here and delayed his trip to Hong Kong because he was reluctant to leave such a lovely place too soon.   The most tempting place in Yanghuo is the Slabstone Street,which has gained a new name as “The Western Street”.The street,with a total length of 1,000 meters,spans a history of 1,410 years.

On both sides of the street are a few hundred shops,selling mainly souvenirs and antiques to (cater for) the foreigners’ tastes.Strolling on the

street,tourists will be amazed to find that Eastern and Western culture blend so well here.

作文二:《地点描写类作文》5200字

中考英语书面表达    地点描写类写作

写前输入:

1) 用于按空间展开的段落之中的连接词和过渡词有:

above             in front of            in the centre of         on the left

across            below                    in the distance        on the right

beyond          nearby                   opposite to            over

also                further                  next to                   on top of

up                  down                    close to                  beneath

under           around                 near to                 along

2)有关地点说明文应该着重掌握面积﹑人口﹑位置﹑环境﹑今昔对比等。以城市为例: (请仔细体会下面的句子的精彩之处)

1.Our city covers … square kilometers.

2.Our city has an area of …square kilometers.

3.The size of our city is ... square kilometers.

4.The population of our city is…

5.Our city has a population of …

6.Our city is located in…

7.It is very convenient for you to e to our city…

8.You can take a bus, a train or a plane to….

9.The best way to experience… is to take a bus tour.

10.It takes … to take a bus from… to…

11.… is only a few bus stops from downtown.

12.… is within easy reach.

13.The city stretches itself lazily along …..

14.The city is well-known / famous for its … / as…

15.The city offers …..and a variety of …

16.Wherever you go, there are plenty of activities to choose from.

17.You can go on the city tours to enjoy the sights, taste the local food, explore the lively nightlife

and learn about its history and culture.

18.If you are interested in …, you can…. If you prefer…, you can…

19.After exploring …, you can relax and enjoy a good meal in…

20.There’re … where visitors can find shade from the hot sun and a moment’s rest from the busy

city.

21.A walk around …is a feast for the mind as well as the eye.

22.The city is home to …

23.The city treats visitors to (blue seas)…

24.… is a must-see for tourists, as……

25.The city, known as…, attracts millions of visitors from all over the world.

26.…may explain why people spend so much time on trips to …

27.… reminds visitors that it is an important…

28.You are sure to have a wonderful time in….

29.Few visitors leave the city feeling disappointed.

【点拨】

一、应试技巧点拨

1. 首先要认真审题。读懂题目所给信息,初步确定要点内容,并可用序号标出以免遗忘。

2. 列提纲,使要点条理化,统筹安排布局。

3. 勿要直译,需意译。尤其对提示作文要构建完整故事结构,不可逐句罗列了事。

4. 要刻意把好语言关。要用自己最熟悉的句型结构和词语,力求文理通顺,语言准确。 没有把握的词句不要写,确有把握的可以锦上添花。

5. 遇到一时想不起的词语,需变通。可以用同义近义词代替,也可以用否定词加反义词来 表达,亦可变换句式。不可钻牛角尖,更不能生造词语,汉化表达。

6. 注意文章的长度。看具体内容而定,如果内容多应多用复杂句式,如果内容不多,为了 达到词的限数应多用简单句式,并适当增补合理内容。

7. 注意保持卷面整洁,书写工整清楚,书写的好坏会直接影响阅卷老师的情绪。

8. 最后注意复查全文: 看内容要点有无遗漏,标点、格式、大小写、汉语拼音是否规范, 是否有语病等。

9. 近几年的中考书面表达已经提高了能力的要求,鼓励考生多使用高级词汇和复杂句型, 这样可以直接影响中考书面表达的得分档次。同学们应该学习使用分词短语﹑with复合结 构 ﹑定语从句﹑ 强调句型﹑ 感叹句 ﹑倒装句和it作形式主语等复杂句型。 如下: As we can see, …                                      It is well-known to us all that…

It is ∕ was… who ∕ that…                   It is ∕ was +adj .∕ n.+ for ∕ of sb. to do sth.  so …that …                    too … to …         with +n..∕ prep. ∕ v-ing .∕ v-ed, …… How +adj..∕ adv.+subject+be!                  What+adj.+n.+subject+be!

因此,只要考生准确地使用了以上这些高级词汇和复杂句型,就一定会增强文章的表达效果,也就一定能在中考英语的书面表达中获得较为理想的成绩。

二、书面表达中学生常见错误类型

(一) 要点散乱型——不着边际胡乱写;

(二) 逻辑混乱型——多出现在语句或情节描绘中;

(三) 语法不通型——一般出现在语句中;

(四) 误用词语型——语句中用词错误

(五) 粗心大意型——不认真阅读提示,或错写内容或丢三落四

(六) 喧宾夺主型——不分主次信马由缰丢掉主要内容而将非主要内容大写或特写

范文欣赏与学习

假如你是李晓华,住在江城。你的加拿大笔友Bob来信谈到他所居住的城市,并希望 了解你家乡江城的情况。请你用英语写一封回信。回信须包括下面的内容:

自然情况: 位于长江边、风景优美、适合居住

成就: 经济发展迅速,新建了不少工厂、住房、道路

存在问题: 水、空气污染,交通拥挤

对江城发展的看法 (内容由考生自己拟定)

注意:    1、回信中不能使用“江城”以外的地名。

2、 词数120左右。信的开头与结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数。

3.、参考词汇:  经济economy

参考范文:  (One possible version)  Dear Bob,

It’s very kind of you to write to me and let me know about your beautiful city. Now I’d like

to tell you something about my hometown Jiangcheng.

The city stands on the bank of the Changjiang River. It is a beautiful place for people to live in. Its economy has been developing rapidly in the past ten years. New factories, houses and roads have been built. More schools and hospitals are available for its people. However, there are still some problems, such as water and air pollution and heavy traffic in rush hours.

In my opinion, Jiangcheng should develop its economy scientifically. I would also think that the growth of its population should be brought under control so that we’ll have a better hometown in future.

写作练习   练习1. 假定你是李华。应英国朋友Bob的要求,写一封短信介绍你校图书馆的基本情况。内容须包括下面两幅图中的相关信息。

注意:1.词数100左右;      2.可以适当增减细节,以使行文连贯;      3.开头语已为你写好。内容要点:  1. 图书馆的位置:前有花园,后有教学楼

2. 内部环境:宽敞、有书架、报刊、书籍等

3. 图书馆功能:借阅、借阅数量和借期

4. 开放时间           5. 合适的结尾

参考范文:  Dear Bob,

Thank you for your last letter asking about our library.

Our library is in the center of the school. There is a beautiful garden in front of it and our classroom building is right behind it. The library is big. When you get inside, you will see many shelves full of books on different subjects. There are also lots of newspapers and magazines. We borrow books and do some reading in the library. According to the rule, every student can borrow up to 5 books each time and keep them for 10 days. It is open from 9 a.m. to 7 p.m. from Monday to Friday and closed on weekends.

We all like our library very much.

练习2.   假设你是李华,你的新西兰笔友Nick 将于八月来四川旅游,特来信询问有关旅游景点情况。请根据下表所提供的要点,写一封回信,并表示盼望他的到来。

旅游资源 许多世界著名的风景名胜,如:

九寨沟(海子;清澈见底;色彩斑斓)

都江堰水利工程(2,000多年历史;仍在发挥作用)

相关信息 气候适宜,交通方便

注意: 1.词数100左右,信的格式及开头以为你写好(不记入总词数)。

2.可根据内容要点适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

3.参考词汇:省份province    海子lake    都江堰水利工程Dujiangyan Irrigation 参考范文:  Dear Nick,

作文三:《英语作文:描写地点专题》4200字

Writing:描写地方类作文 介绍地理位置的说明文,它的写作顺序建议如下:  地面气城著(地名)

应介绍这个地方的地(地理位置).面(面积,人口),气(气候状况),城(两个著名城市),著(与众不同之处)

写说明文,时态以现在时为主,人称以第三人称为主。

地点表达的常用句型要记好。如:

1.地点状语+,+主句 /(历史) (分词结构做状语)

 Located in…, ×××is a city…with a history of…

 lie in\on...

 ...lies near\behind\in front of\by the side of...\between\among...

 ...stands at the foot of\on the top of...

 With sp. on/to the east/west/north\ …borders … to the south\ west\east\south e.g. China, located/ lying in the east of Asia, is one of largest countries in the world, with/bordering Japan to the east and Russia on the north.

2.面积+人口 (with结构做定语)

…covers/takes up a total area of …with a population of ….

…has a population of…,

… is a city with a population of…

e.g. (1) Beijing, the capital of China, is a large city with a population of over 12,000,000.

(2) Our school, which takes up 63 thousand square kilometers, is very large in size.

3.气候特征(注意表示天气变化的形容词)

 It is warm all the seasons (warm, dry, cold,sunny, rainy…)四季温暖。

 it's like spring all the year round. 四季如春。

 People in sp. can enjoy typical tropical cimate(典型的热带气候), which is so pleasan that every year, many tourists e here to enjoy the beautiful scenery, among which…is the most popular.

 The average temperature ranges between 23℃ and 39℃.

4.历史和文化名城(with 结构作定语)

 …has a history of…

 …with a history of…

e.g. China has a history of over 5,000 years.

Egypt is an Arabian country with a long history.

5.著名特殊之处  注意词组的润

 ×××  is famous for…

 The special character of ××× is attracting more and more tourists from all over the world.

1)The places around our city are rich in natural /traveling resources.

2)The city, known as…, attracts  millions of visitors from all over the world.

4)The city is home to …

e.g. Guangzhou is rich in traveling resources, such as the famous “eight scenery of YangCheng”.

a) b)

c)

d)

e)

f)

g)

常见描写地点的篇章模板  ×××lies in the southwest of ... It covers/has a total area of 7,686,850 square kilometers with a population of 2.8million It is warm (dry, cold,sunny,rainy...) Because×××  is famous for/ is well known for …, the tourists from all over the The special character of ××× is attracting more and more tourists from all over the world. It has many world-famous places of interest, such as... and....

本次段考作文赏析:

Sample 1: I’d like to tell you something about our city. You’ve made the wise choice to travel kilometers. It has a population of about 5 million. The city has a history of more than 2,400 years, and was once the capital of ten dynasties. **It is a very beautiful city Xuanwu Lake, the Jiming Temple and the Stone City. It also has many modern factories and high buildings.      **Besides, the nice weather and convenient transportation here can make your trip more

Thank you. Sample 2: Nanjing, the capital city of Jiangsu Province, which is located in the southeast of China, the capital city of ten dynasties in the history, like Bisides, many modern factories and high buildings are seen everywhere. **  Most importantly, people can enjoy the pleasant climate all the year around and the convenient transportation available can make you enjoy the beautiful scenery in the city easily.

Useful expressions:

1.  位于    ××× lies in / be located in

Located in …, ×××is one of …

2. 属于   belong to     3. 有……人口 have / with a population of

4. 面积/占地…平方公里  It covers/ has a total area of …square kilometres.

5. 有……年悠久的历史  have / with a long history of …

6. 以……著名 be famous for       7. 被誉为 be known / honoured as

8. 自从……解放以来 since the liberation of ×××

Since ××× was liberated, …

9. 在……方面取得很大的进步have made great progress in…

10. 在…

谋篇: 用适当的连贯词使文章语篇连贯.

1. 归属: 中华人民共和国

地理位置: 中国西南方,被誉为世界屋脊(Roof of the World) the “Roof of the World”, the People’s Republic of China and

2. 人口: 约2,800,000     面积: 120多万平方公里

3. 省会: 拉萨 (Lhasa),被誉为世界上最高的城市 “The highest city” in the world.

4. 特征: 700多年的悠久历史;风景秀丽,有很多享誉海内外的名胜古迹,如布达拉宫。       more than 700 years, Tibet has a number of world-famous places of interest, such as the Potala Palace.

5. 1951年5月23日解放以来,西藏在政治、经济(economy)、文化等方面都取得了很大的进步。

on May 23, 1951, it politics, economy and culture.

the “Roof of the World”, the People’s Republic of China more than 1.2 million square kilometers. The capital city is Lhasa, which “The highest city” in the world. more than 700 years, Tibet has a on May 23, 1951, it politics, economy and culture.

作文四:《人物描写,地点描写,表格描写作文训练题》2700字

人物介绍作文训练题

(2012年广东高考题)第一节  基础写作 (共1小题;满分15分)

你接受了一项写作任务,要为英语校报写一篇人物介绍。

【写作内容】

请根据以下信息,介绍一位传奇人物

姓  名:Allan Stewart

国  籍:澳大利亚

出生日期:1915年3月7日

世界纪录:2006年获硕士学位时年龄最大

学习态度:挑战自我,永远为时不晚。

第一个学位:1936年获得

第二个学位:医学博士

第三个学位:80多岁时决定学习法律,2006年获得硕士学位。

第四个学位:2012年通过网络学习获得,善于合理安排学习时间,受到老师表扬。

*硕士学位:master’s degree;  **博士:doctor

[写作要求]

只能用5个句子表达全部内容

[评分标准]

句子结构准确,信息内容完整,篇章连贯。

地点介绍作文训练题 (江苏卷2004)假如你是李晓华,住在江城。你的加拿大笔友Bob来信谈到他所居住的城市,并希望了解你家乡江城的情况。请你用英语写一封回信。回信须包括表中的内容:

自然情况:位于长江边、风景优美、适合居住

成就:经济发展迅速,新建了不少工厂、住房、道路

存在问题 :水、空气污染,交通拥挤

对江城发展的看法:应科学地发展经济,控制人口的增长

注意: 1. 回信中不能使用“江城”以外的地名。

2. 用五个句子表达所有内容。信的开头与结尾已为你写好,不计入总句数。

3. 参考词汇:经济economy n.

Dear Bob,

It’s very kind of you to write to me and let me know about your beautiful city. Now I’d like to tell you something about my hometown Jiangcheng.

Yours,

Xiao Hua

Allan Stewart, of Australian nationality, was born on March 7th,1915. He got his first degree  in 1936, and then his second degree of Doctor of medicine. He believes that one is never too  old to challenge himself. Therefore, in his eighties, he decided to study law, and in 2006  he set a world record for being the oldest person to get a master’s degree. Because he  was good at arranging his study time, he got praise from his teacher, and in 2012 he managed  to get his fourth degree by network learning.

Dear Bob,

It’s very kind of you to write to me and let me know about your beautiful city. Now I’d like to tell you something about my hometown Jiangcheng.

The city standing on the bank of the Changjiang River is a beautiful place for people to live in. Its economy has been developing rapidly in the past ten years. New factories, houses, and roads have been built and more schools and hospitals are available for its people. However, there are still some problems, such as water and air pollution and heavy traffic in rush hours. In my opinion, Jiangcheng should develop its economy scientifically and the growth of its population should be brought under control so that we’ll have a better hometown in future.                                              Yours,

Xiao Hua

Last month, our pany carried out a survey about shopping online among 1000 interviewees  younger than 35 years old. 64% of those interviewed are willing to shop online, mainly

because they think the Internet makes it convenient for them to buy what they need although  they are staying at home. Besides, they believe that goods online are cheaper, with a variety of  brands to choose from. The rest of the interviewees don’t want to shop online, claiming that  goods on sale on the Internet might be fake and that they are worried about being cheated out  of money. In conclusion, only by guarding against the disadvantages of on-line shopping will  more and more people choose the shop online.

作文五:《高中英语话题作文范文背诵:人物描写;地点描写》4500字

有关描写地点的话题

语法填空

locate) in the northwest of North China Plain, Beijing, the capital of China, is a educate). It 3_______ (cover) an area of more than  a population of 13,819,000. Besides, it has has a 5______ (vary) of climates, rainy in summer and dry in winter. The annual average temperature is 11.8 degrees Celsius. What’s more, Beijing,  has 2 counties and 16 districts, is  famous ancient city a long history in the world. 8______ has a large number of places of interest, 9______ which the Forbidden City is the largest palace in the world. It is also famous 10______ the Temple of heaven, the Great Wall and so on.

Description of a place:

1. 位于美洲大陆的北部,加拿大是世界上第二国。( located in…, X is …)

2. 它有着7686850平方公里的面积,同时拥有3千万人口。( It covers a total area of …, with a population of …)

3. 这里有着多样的气候。( 温暖、凉爽、寒冷、干燥、湿润、阳光明媚的、有风暴的、下雨的…)

4. 这里有很多大城市,其中温哥华气候宜人。( …, among which)

5. 它以它的自然资源和野生动物闻名于世。( … be famous for…)

1. Located in the north America continent, Canada is the second largest country in the world.

2. It covers a total area of 7,686,850 square kilometers with a population of about 30 million.

3. It has a variety of climates.  (warm, cool, cold, dry, humid, sunny, stormy, rainy…)

4. It has many big cities, among which Vancouver is with pleasant climates.

5. It is famous for its natural resource and wildlife.

For your reference

作文演练

为了迎接亚运会的到来,有关部门准备出一本广州的图册,向外国人介绍广州,现在请你为广州市

话题作文范文背诵

1.有关人物描写的话题

Qian Xuesen , born in Shanghai in 1911, is one of the greatest Chinese scientists . Not only was he interested in science ,but he also loved music. He graduated from the Shanghai Jiaotong University in 1934. A year later, he left to study in America, where he received / got his doctor's degrees in both aerospace and mathematics. In 1955 , he returned to China, and devoted all his life to scientific research. However, to the sorrow of the Chinese , the great man passed away this year at the age of 98. As the pioneer in the new Chinese missile and nuclear weapons development, he was honoured with the title “Father of the missile” for many outstanding  contributions he made to our country.

2.有关旅游的话题

my horizons. What interested me most were the art galleries, where all kinds of paintings could be seen. While in England, it took us a whole week to tour round London, the most famous historical and cultural city. In addition, we spent several days in the countryside, which made us feel at ease and content with our life there. To my delight, I made friends with (课后作业)It's my honor to have this chance to show you around the ISLAND ON THE LAKE. First, we will set out for the island by ferryboat at 9:00a.m. On arriving at the island, we will visit the botanical gardens, which are full of a variety of plants and the site of an ole temple with a long history of over 600 years. We will have lunch in the restaurant on the island at 11:30 and after that we will move on to visit the bird house, where there are a range of valuable birds. At the end of the tour, I will lead you to the gift shop, where you will be able to buy some souvenirs to remember this special trip. Please return at 3:30 p.m. by cable car.

3.有关健康饮食的话题

Healthy eating

Living a healthy life makes people feel so happy that everyone dreams of good health. Here are some ways to achieve it.

First, you need a balanced diet. It pays to eat fresh fruit and vegetables, which are easy to digest and rich in fibers and vitamins. Don't eat the food which contains too much sugar and fat, like butter, cheese, and chocolate. Fat and sugar make people put on weight easily.

Second, getting into good living habits is very important. Do regular exercise to build up your body every day. Besides, enough rest is necessary. Don't work too hard and never smoke.

The last, love your life and the people around and try to bring them laugh and amusements.

4.有关描写地点的话题

Guangzhou

South China, Guangzhou, the capital of Guangdong, 743, 4 square 9.94 million. cool wet winters and hot damp summers. the Chinese Export Commodities Fair is held twice a year there.

5.有关野生动植物保护的话题

Save the Giant Panda

The giant panda is one of the rare animals in the world, which lives in Wolong Natural Reserve, Sichuan province. There are only about 1000 wide giant pandas left. In the past few years, a great many bamboo forests have been destroyed as the result of the unusually hot weather, which also makes pandas in danger of dying out. Fortunately, our Chinese people have realized the importance of protecting pandas. a new natural reserve is being built. I am appreciated that the number of pandas is increasing gradually.