建议信(一) 假定你是李华, 你的朋友张柯发 e-mail 给你, 就买什么样的英语词典想 听听你的建议。请根据下列提示 , 用英语给他回一封 120 个词左右的 e-mail, 推荐他买电子词典。 1. 方便、快捷; 2. 内置多部词典、能发音; 3. 能储存资料; 4. 其他……
建议信(二) 假设你是李华 , 请根据以下要点写一封信 , 劝说全校同学过低碳生活 (live a low-carbon life)。 1. 陈述理由: 为什么要过低碳生活? (环境质量日益恶化等) 2. 如何过低碳生活? 提出至少三条建议。 (必要时才开灯; 让电 器按节能方式运转; 骑自行车; 限制塑料袋使用; 垃圾分类等)
There are several factors leading to my suggestion. To begin with, with the electronic dictionary being much smaller than the mon one, it is convenient for you to carry it wherever going. Additionally, you can get what you want in the electronic dictionary as soon as possible, for consulting this kind of dictionary is really a piece of cake. When meeting with the useful material, you can store it as much as possible because there is much RAM(内存)in it. What makes it outstanding from a variety of others, I think, is that it can give you a vivid, clear and correct pronunciation just like a teacher standing by you. With so many advantages, why not buy one? I do hope my suggestion will be useful to you. Yours, Li Hua As living a low-carbon life is a good way to reduce emissions of greenhouse gases, I shall carry out my plan in the following ways. To begin with, I shall only turn on the lights when necessary and keep the refrigerator and air conditioners working in the low-carbon mode to save energy. Additionally, the bus or bicycle will be my first choice. Last but not least, not only will I limit the use of plastic bags when I am shopping, but also I will separate my rubbish into non-recyclable and recyclable waste whenever it is possible. I hope that more and more schoolmates will join in the activity.
作文二:《英语作文1:建议信》2100字一、建议信 Letter of Advice
建议信是对收信人就某一问题提出看法、建议或忠告。建议信不同于投诉信,所以写信人一定要注意礼貌当先。建议信一般包括以下内容:首先说明写信的目的,其次,在肯定优点的基础上提出自己的建议或看法(否则别人以为你在投诉,而不是在提建议),最后表达希望
采纳建议。
写作“三步走”:
自我介绍、说明目的—>委婉地提出建议及改进措施,或提出忠告—>礼貌地总结或期盼回
复
二、书面表达之建议信
三、典范文背诵
假设你是小明的好朋友李华,小明参加了一个英语演讲比赛,他对比赛非常担心,向你求助,请你根据以下内容给他写一封建议信。
[写作内容]
1. 说明回信的意图;2. 向小明提出建议;3. 预祝小明比赛成功。
参考词汇:
充分准备:1.get well prepared 充分准备
2. a brief and
concise language 简
洁精练的语言
3.
leave/make a
deep
impression on 给某人留下深刻的印象
Dear Xiaoming,
...
[参考范文]
Dear Xiaoming,
I’m very glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to prepare the English speech contest. Here are a few suggestions.
First of all, it’s important to get well prepared before the speech contest by practicing before a mirror. Besides, you had better use a brief and concise language in your speech so that you can leave a deep impression on the judges. When you are giving the speech, remember to keep smile and even if you forget your words, don’t be panic and just continue your speech, because no one will notice it. Wish you success in the speech!
Yours,
Li Hua
四、课后练习
为了帮助中学生健康成长,某中学英文报开辟了“HEART-TO-HEART”专栏。假设你是该栏目的编辑Jamie,收到一封署名为Worried的求助信。信中该同学向你诉说了自己的困扰:近日容易发脾气,使正常的学习和生活受到了影响。请用英文给该同学写一封回信。
内容要点如下:
1.表示理解并给予安慰;
2.提出建议并说明理由。
注意:
1.词数120左右;
2.信中不能出现与本人相关的信息;
3.信的开头与结尾已为你拟好,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:temper n. 脾气,情绪
Hi Worried.:
I’m sorry to know that you’re having such a bad time at the moment.
Yours,
Jamie
参考范文:
Hi Worried,
I'm sorry to know that you're having such a bad time at the moment. The truth is that everyone will have one of those periods when things seem to be going wrong, so you don't have to worry much. The important thing is to learn to control your temper so that you may not do or say anything you’ll regret. Here are three useful tips:
First, talk to someone you trust about how you feel. This is a good way of letting your anger out without hurting others or yourself. Second, go outdoors and play team games with your friends as physical exercise is an effective way to get rid of anger. And third, keep optimistic about your future. Such a positive attitude towards life can be helpful in lifting your spirits.
I hope you'll soon feel calmer and carry on as normal.
作文三:《建议信英语作文》3400字英语写作练习:A letter for advice
Dear Miss Wang,
I’m a student from GuiZhou Experimental High School. I have a problem. I argued with my best friend Lisa for some very tiny things and said some bad words to her a few days ago. Then, we never talk to each other any more.Now, I feel quite lonely sometimes and don’t want to lose my best friend. I know she must be hurt by my words, and I am not sure that she still want to be my friend or not? I do want to change this situation, but I don’t know how. I would be grateful if you could give me some advice.
Yours, Jim What is Jim’s problem? If you were Miss Wang, what would you say? Dear Jim, (写作模板) I'm glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to (引出主题). Here are a few suggestions. First, it is important to . Then, it also helps to . Besides, it should be a good idea to . You can also . (此三句不同的句式提出建议) As to , I suggest (有时根据需要具体到某一反面). In addition, (其他建议). I'm sure (预测可能的结果,给对方以行动的信心和决心). I'm looking forward to (表达愿望).
Sincerely yours,
Miss Wang
英语建议信格式提出建议常用句型I suggest that… Why not do…? Why don’t you do…? You would better do/ not do… If I were you,I would…… It seems to me that you could…… I think it would be more beneficial if you could…… I feel that it would be beneficial if… You may consider doing… As you may agree that I would like to suggest that…
英语建议信格式-结尾常用句式
I hope that my suggestions are helpful for your decision-making anyway.
I would be more than happy to see improvement in this regard.
I believe that you will take my suggestions into serious account.
I would be ready to discuss about this matter with you to further details.
Whatever you decide to do, good luck with your studies/work! 写作中常用连接词:
(1)表选择关系或对等关系的连接词:either…or…,neither…nor, or, as well as…, and, both…and…
(2)表因果关系或对等关系的连接词:therefore, so, as a result, as the result of …,because of, due to …,owing to, thanks to等。
(3)表时间顺序的连接词:the moment, as soon as, at first, then, later, meanwhile, at the beginning, in the end, before long, for the first(second…)time, the minute等。
(4)表转折关系的连接词:yet, and yet, but , while, on the contrary, on the other hand, however, at the same time(然而)等。
(5)表解释说明的连接词:that is, that is to say, in other words, such as, for instance, and so on, etc. and the like等。
(6)表递进关系的连接词:not only…but (also), what’s more, what's worse, besides, in addition, worse still, moreover, above all等。
(7)表示总结的连接词:in a word, on the whole, in short, briefly, in brief, to sum up, in all 练习:假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Peter来信向你咨询如何才能学好中文。请你根据下列要点写回信。 要点:⑴ 参加中文学习班;⑵ 看中文书刊、电视; ⑶ 学唱中文歌曲; ⑷ 交中国朋友。
注意:可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;开头语已给出。
Dear Peter,
Best wishes,
Li Hua
作文四:《英语建议信满分作文》2900字作文题目】假如你是李夏。你看到关国留学生Sharon 在网上发贴,.希望有人能帮助她提高普通话(Mandarin)水平,她可以教英语作为回报。请根据以下提示用英语给她写一封电子邮件。
1.表达给她提供帮助的意愿; 2.说明你能胜任辅导的理由; 3.给出讲好普通话的两点建议; 4.提出你学习英语的具体需求。 注意:
1. 词数120左右,开头语已为你写好;2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; 3.
文中不得透漏个人姓名和学校名称。 范文1: help you with your Mandarin. As a native Chinese speaker, I can speak Chinese clearly and fluently, and my teachers think highly of my spoken Chinese. I have taught some foreigners Mandarin, which makes me have much experience in teaching.
As for speaking Mandarin, it’s better to pay much attention to the pronunciation. Besides, you must take notice of the handwriting. And you also should keep it in mind that paring notes with your classmates frequently is a good way to improve your study.
In return l hope you can help me with my spoken English. When I speak English, I often feel a little nervous. Can you give me some advice on how to overe that? Looking forward to hearing from you. 莎伦,你好:
我是李夏。我从你的帖子上看到你想提高普通话水平。我愿意帮助你的普通话。作为一个中国人,我可以清楚、流利地讲中文。我的老师们对我的中文口语有着高度的评价。我教过一些外国人的普通话,这让我在教学上有很多的经验。
至于说普通话,最好多注意发音。此外,你还必须注意书写。而且你也应该记住,与你的同学经常交换意见是一个改善你学习的好方法。
作为回报,我希望你能帮助我的英语口语。当我说英语的时候,我经常感到有点紧张。你能给我一些建议来克服这个问题吗? 期待收到你的来信。 范文2: to have the chance to help you with your Mandarin learning and I am very happy to have you as
my English teacher. I'm good at speaking standard Mandarin. I've been a broadcaster in the school’s broadcasting station for years. When it es to how to speak fluent Mandarin, I suggest that you learn a bunch of pronunciation rules first, which are quite different from the English ones. Another suggestion is to practice more, just as the saying goes, “Practice makes perfect”. However, my English is just OK and I still have many problems with my study. I really hope that you can give me good advice on how to study English well. I believe we both can make much progress with each others’ help. Thank you! 莎伦,你好:
我是李夏。我从你的帖子上看到你想提高普通话水平。我很荣幸有机会能帮你学习普通话,同时也很高兴你能做我的英语老师。我能说一口流利且标准的普通话。我在学校广播站担任广播员有好几年了。当谈到怎样能说一口流利的普通话,我建议你首先要学习一些发音规则,这些发音规则和英语发音规则完全不同。另一个建议就是口语练习。俗话说:“熟能生巧。”另外,我的英语水平很一般,在学习上也有很多问题。我真心希望你能给我一些关于如何学好英语的建议。我相信我们彼此在互相助之下,都能取得很大的进步。
Dear MS Chen ,
I’m Li Hua, a student from Class2, Grade 3. I’m writing to apply for the position as a student volunteer.
I really want to obtain this precious opportunity because, by offering my service, I will be able to improve my organizational ability, munication skills as well as my confidence in speaking English in public.
As an outgoing girl, I get along well with my classmates. Besides, I have such a good mand of English that I am elected as assistant to my English teacher. Successfully, I have lent a helping hand to her in several English activities of my class, which have been appreciated by both teachers and classmates.
I am sure that I can perfectly live up to your expectations. I will be gratefull if you could give me a kind consideration.
Looking forward to your reply. Yours truly, Li Hua
作文五:《建议信-高考英语作文》6200字建议信----A Letter of Suggestion
一、假定你叫李华,最近,你的好友林浩来信说他升入高中以后感到不太适应,不知道如何结交新朋友。请你用英语给他回一封信,提出一些建议。 提示:1、与人接触时要面带微笑、对别人又好。
2、关心同学、乐于助人。
3、学会倾听很重要,这样别人乐于和你相处。
4、积极参加班级活动并展示自己才能。
5、……(你的建议)
才能:talent
注意:1.词数130左右,信的格式已给出,但不计入总词数;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
范文(一)
Dear Lin Hao,
I’m glad to receive your letter. From your letter, I know you have the problem of how to make new friends in high school. The following are my suggestions.
First, you should smile and try to be friendly when you meet people. You should also care about your schoolmates. If you are always ready to help them, they will understand you better. Second, it is important for you to be a good listener. That way, when people are with you, they will feel fortable and happy. Finally, it is better for you to take an active part in class activities where you can show your talent.
I hope my advice will be helpful to you. May you be happy in your new school. Yours
Li Hua
范文(二)、
Dear Li Ming,
In your letter, you said you are not good at municating with others and often feel lonely. I think you can just make it so long as you can follow the advice below.
First, you should learn about your classmates’ likes and dislikes. Second, you should take an active part in the discussion held in your class and show your own opinion actively, and at the same time, learn to listen to others patiently. Then you can make friends with more people. Third, it will be a good idea to help others when necessary.
With time going on, people will know you better and like to make friends with you if you can do the above. I hope you will find these ideas useful
Yours,
Li hua
二、根据提示,写一篇150词左右的建议信。假如你是某报编辑,昨天收到一位学生来信。请根据来信的内容和所给的要点提示用英语写一封回信。(要注意写信的格式)
Dear Editor,
I am a hard-working girl and want to be the top student in my class. But in exams, I always make many careless mistakes. I really worry about it. What should I do to improve my performance in exams?
Best regards
Yours sincerely,
Li Fang
要点提示: 1.收到来信,获悉信中所提到的有关情况;
2.不要压力太大;
3.如有问题请教老师或同学;
4.考试时合理分配(distribute)时间,并尽量抽出几分钟检查;
5.其它建议………………
Dear Li Fang,
I read your letter yesterday. It's good that you have a high aim for yourself and you know what has prevented you from achieving high scores in exams. But you should remember that even the very best student can make mistakes sometimes. So don't put too much pressure on yourself.
As far as I am concerned, learning from your mistakes in past exams is a quick way to stop making the same mistakes next time. To begin with, if there are questions that can't be solved by yourself, you should turn to your teachers or classmates for help. What's more, during the exams you'd better make a good plan to distribute your time according to the questions. Besides, try to leave a few minutes at the end to check your answers.
Enjoy the challenge that each new exam brings to you. I believe a good learning habit will finally help you gain success.
Best wishes
Yours sincerely,
Editor
三、假如你是Jack,你的朋友Simon写信告诉你他的问题,他沉迷于打篮球,每天花很多时间打球,结果家庭作业不能准时上交。父母和老师很不满,要他放弃这个爱好,他很生气。请你就Simon的问题给他提一些有用的建议,如:
1.认真计划好自己的时间;
2.列出所有的家庭作业,然后计算完成这些作业需要的时间,从而了解自己有多少空闲时间可以用来打篮球;
3.不要放弃自己的爱好,但也不要忘记学习;
4.保持学习和爱好之间的平衡。
范文:
Dear Simon,
Thank you for your letter. I hope I can offer you some useful suggestions.
You say you don't have enough time to do your homework. I think you'd better
plan your day carefully. It will be a good choice to make a list of all the homework you have to do. Then work out how much time you need to plete it all. This will give you an idea of how much free time you can have to play basketball. Don't give up your hobby but do not forget about your study, either. You should keep a balance between study and hobbies.
I hope my answers will be of some value to you.
Best wishes
Yours sincerely,
Jack
英语建议信写作常用句型
A letter of Advice建议信是向别人提出合理性的建议,以便使对方接受自己的想法、主张,解决有关问题,因此要求建议信要写得简明扼要,目的明确,理由充足,具有合理性和说服力。
常用句型:
1. I'd like to suggest that you can give me a prompt response.
2. May I suggest that you can…
3. I wish…
4. I really hope that…
5. What about… ?
6. How about… ?
7. My suggestions are as follows.
8. It is my pleasure to offer you some advice on…
9. If you could take what I suggest seriously, you would…
10. When it es to such a situation, I would like to suggest that you can…
英文建议信开头段常用句式和套话
I am writing in reply to…
I would like to suggest that…
I am writing with my suggestion proposal about…
I am writing to express my views concerning…
You have asked me for my advice with regard to…and I will try to make some conducive suggestions.
表达建议常用句式和套话
I feel that it would be beneficial if…
I would like to suggest that…
I would remend that…
If I were you, I would…
You may consider doing…
It would seem to me that you could…
As you may agree that…
建议信结尾常用句式和套话
I hope you will find these suggestions/proposals/remendations helpful/practical/ useful.
I trust you will take my suggestion into account.
I would be more than happy to see improvements in this regard.
I would be ready to discuss this matter to further details.
建议信模板1:
Dear _________,
I am very glad to hear that you want to seek some suggestions about_________in order to_________ .
From my point of view, _________. Also, to you, I highly remend that _________. On the one hand,_________. On the other hand, _________ . Besides, it is unnecessary for you to _________. Consequently, I believe that _________ . I hope that my opinions are of help to you, and please feel free to contact me for more questions.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
建议信模板2:
Dear ____,
I am writing to express my views concerning ________. In the first place, I would like to say thank you for the help and everything else you have been offering to us. Meanwhile, I also want to make some advice to better _________.
Firstly, we have found that ________. Secondly, we want to ________. Finally, we hope that __________.
I am looking forwards to your consideration about my proposals. Thanks in advance for that.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
建议信模板3:
Dear ______,
①You have asked me for my advice with regard to ______ , and I will try to make some conductive suggestions here.
②In my humble opinion, you would be wise to take the following actions: ______(建议的内容).
③I hope you will find these proposals useful, and I would be ready to discuss this matter with you to further details.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
作文六:《高中英语作文,建议信》20100字篇一:高中英语作文--建议信
建议
信(1)-----阐释原因;提出建议类
请你代表你班同学
给校长写一封信,反映一下你校食堂的几点问题,以引起学校重视,并针对问题提出两条合
理建议。问题包括:
1. 菜价昂贵,菜市
单一;2. 排队时间长,浪费午休时间;3. 味道不佳,浪费现象严重。
注意:1. 词数不少
于120; 2. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;3. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 参
考词汇: 食堂 canteen dear principal,
recently, many
students are discussing the problems of the canteen.
________________________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________ i sincerely
hope you can adopt my suggestions. thank you!
yours, li hua
作文范文: dear
principal,
some students
think the prices of the dishes are too high and that the choices are too limited.
another concern is that the time spent in waiting is so long that we have less time
to have a rest. meanwhile, some students think that the taste of the food is awful,
which leads to a lot of waste. the prices be more reasonable and the choices of dishes
be more various.需注意的词汇、表达:
1. delicious
waiting taste(n.味道) tasty (adj.可口的) cook (n.厨师) cooker (n.炊具)
price 价格
2. lower /bring
down the price 降低价格 3. at a lower/reasonable price 以较低的价格 4. varieties of
dishes 种类多样的菜品 5. for one thing,„„. for another,„„
6. make sb
(not)do sth
7. wait /stand in
line / in a queue for a long time 8. the kinds of food are . 表达食堂出现的问题:
9. the prices of
dishes are so high that many of us can’t afford them.
10. there are so
few dishes to choose from, which is far from satisfactory. / which can’t satisfy
our
needs.
11. it takes us so
much time to stand in line, which decreases our time of rest at noon. 12. the food
in the canteen doesn’t taste .
the taste of food
in the canteen isn’t
13. the food in
the canteen tastes so bad that a lot of food is left and wasted 14. it’s a waste
of time to stand in line for a long time.
15. the food in
the canteen tastes so bad, which leads to a severe phenomenon of wasting food. 16.
in the long run, it’s bad for our health and study.
17. it goes
without saying that it will influence our sleep in the afternoon. 表达提出的建议:
18. improving the
taste of the food is also a good solution to the problems. 19. i think it’s necessary
to provide more kinds of food. 20. it’s high time that we took measures to solve
the problems.
so it’s high time
for us to take measures
21. to solve the
problems, i think the canteen should set up a new figure(形象) and improve the
present
condition to satisfy the students’ needs.
22. we hope the
canteen can provide us with dishes of a high quality at a reasonable price. 23. the
canteen should open more windows so that we needn’t wait so long.
24. as far as i’
m concerned, the canteen should attach importance to the quality. what’s more,
different kinds
of food should be provided.
25. measures are
supposed to be taken to improve the conditions of the canteen.
建议模板:
dear „.,
i’m glad to
receive your letter asking for my advice on how to„„.(引出话题). here are a few
suggestions. first of all, it is important to do sth. then, it also helps to do sth.
besides, it should be a good idea to do sth.
建议句型积累:
1. many ways can contribute to solving the problem, but i think the following may
be the most
effective ones.
2. i’d like to
make some suggestions on „„. 3. it’s of great importance for sb to do sth.
it’s necessary
for sb to do sth
4. it would be a
good idea for sb to do sth. / it would be a better idea if„„. 5. it contributes
/helps a lot if „„„ 6. i suggest that „../ my suggestion is that „
it’s better to do
sth
8. measures are
supposed to be taken to do sth
we are supposed
to take effective measures to do sth 9. it’s high time that sb sth. / it’s high
time for sb to do sth
建议信(2)-----阐释原因;提出建议类
假定你是中学生李
华。在一位名叫sad mother的学生家长的博客上,你看到如下内容。请你根据博客内容、写
作要点和要求,用英语给这位家长回复。
i’m the mother of
a fourteen-year-old. recently i have found that my daughter told lies to me. the other
day she told me that she did well in the final exam. however i found out she failed
in math and english. what should i do?
写作要点:
1.表明了解她的问
题; 2.帮她分析孩子撒谎的原因; 3.提出至少两条建议 要求:
1.短文须写在答题
卡的指定区域。 2.短文词数不少于100(不含已写好的部分)。 3.内容充实,结构完整,
语意连贯。 4.书写需清晰、工整。
hi,sad mother,
i have learned
that_____________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
作文范文: hi,sad mother,
she is afraid you
will punish her if she tells you the truth. besides, nowadays, parents put too much
pressure on their kids. in order not to let you down, she lie .
–heart talk with
her, making her know being honest is more important than scores. in addition, don’
t be too strict.微小的) mistakes.
需要注意积累的词汇、短语、和句子:
daughter女儿 expectation 期望 be worried / concerned about 担心 calm down 冷
静下来 at a loss 迷惑不解 keep in touch with 保持联系 be strict with sb in sth 在
某方面对某人要求严格 heart-to-heart 推心置腹的
idea 注意想法
test 测试 text 文本 cheat 欺骗 want sb to do sth 想让某人做某事
1. it was because
she didn’t want to let you down that she pretended to achieve high scores. 2. she
isn’t aware that the lies have hurt both you and herself.
3. being a
teenager, she needs to be encouraged. and it’s you who can do this. 4. it is probably
your high expectations to her that makes her decide to lie.
5. you should
figure out the reason why she lied to you before solving the problem. 6. it goes without
saying that lying is bad behavior.
7. the reason why
she didn’t tell you the truth may be that she didn’t want to let you down.
8. it is
suggested that you should have a face-to-face talk with her so that she might open
her heart to you.
9. to avoid the
lies, you should encourage her rather than blame her when she fails in exams 10. the
reason that leads to the problem may be various.
11. confronted
with (面对) these problems, you should take a series of effective measures to help
you daughter.
13. it’s
suggested that you should attach more importance to physical and mental health.
moreover, it’s better to encourage her to do what she wants. 改错:
1. there are some
advice.
2. don’t sad.
3. you should
give her more encourage.
4. she may afraid
that if she fails in the exam, you will punish her.
5. if she has
difficulty in learning, you should inspire she and help she out. 6. she doesn’t want
you angry. 7. please not to be so worried.
8. one of the
reason is that she isn’t dare to tell you the truth. 9. because she afraid parents.
10. so she don’t
want to mention it. 11. you should apology to her.
12. you’d better
to encourage her to be a honest people. 13. you’d better be care about her health
and study. 14. i’m very understand your condition. 15. she may doesn’t want you
to be angry.
建议信(3)
为了帮助中学生健
康成长,某中学英文报开辟了“heart-to-heart”专栏。假设你是该栏目的编辑jamie,收
到一封署名为worried的求助信。信中该同学向你诉说了自己的困扰:近日容易发脾气,使
正常的学习和生活受到了影响。请用英文给该同学写一封回信。 内容要点如下:
1.表示理解并给予
安慰; 2.提出建议并说明理由。 注意:
1.词数120左右;
2.信中不能出现与
本人相关的信息;
3.信的开头与结尾
已为你拟好,不计入总词数。 参考词汇:temper n. 脾气,情绪 hi worried,
i’m sorry to know
that you’re having such a had time at the moment.
yours, jamie hi worried,
im sorry to know
that youre having such a bad time at the moment. the truth is that everyone will have
one of those periods when things seem to be going wrong, i quite understand how you
are feeling now and there is no need to worry about it so much. the important thing
is to learn to control your temper so that you may not do or say anything you’ll
regret. here are three useful tips.
yours, jamie
highlights:
1. first, you are
supposed to figure out what makes you upset,and then keep away from it. 2. what’
s more, you are supposed to take an active part in outdoor activities to relax.
3. to solve the
problem as soon as possible, you can open your heart to a good friend, talking about
your trouble.
4. carried by two,
burdens are lighter.
5. it’s high time
that you should relieve your pressure.
6. measures are
supposed to be taken to control your temper.
7. there is no
denying that everyone will lose his temper when something unexpected happens. 8.
instead of being angry, what is important for you is to learn to control your temper
from now on.
建议信(4)
高二下期已经过去
半学期,高三已经在向同学们招手。随着学习和心理压力日益加大,一些同学的正常生活受
到影响,如睡眠不好,身体也开始亮起了红灯。请你根据以下要点,给学校的英语刊物写一
篇稿子,向同学们提出建议,并简述理由或举例说明:
1、劳逸结合; 2、
健康饮食; 3、适当锻炼; 4、保持乐观心态。 注意:1、短文必须包括所列内容;2、词
数120左右;
3、文章开头已给出;
4、写成一篇完整的短文,不要逐条列举。
作文范文:
preventing them
sleeping well and causing problems with their health. in order to improve the
condition, i’d like to offer some advice.
i sincerely hope
that the suggestions above will be of great help to you. 句型及短语积累: 1. my advice
is as follows. 2. the following is my advice.
3. finally,
remain optimistic about your future. such a positive attitude towards life can be
helpful in lifting your spirits.
4. then it also
helps to take proper exercise. not only can it strengthen your health, but also it
can make you feel relaxed.
5. go outdoors
and play team games with your friends as it is an effective way to keep healthy. 6.
second, you may as well take some exercise, which is a good way to keep healthy.
7. third, go
outdoors and take exercise. not only can it help students keep healthy, but also it
is a good way to reduce pressure.
9. second, you
are supposed to eat healthy food as it will offer students enough energy.
10. in addition,
you must eat healthy food so as to keep fit, which is of great importance to your
study. 11. as an old saying goes, “all work and no play makes jack a dull boy”.
12. gone are the
days when we were at senior 2 and the senior 3 is saying hello to us.
13. go out to
breathe fresh air and relax your brain.
14. keeping a
healthy diet is essential to you, which helps you keep fit.
15. the most
important thing i think is to seek for the balance between study and pleasure.
16. keep a
balance between study and relaxation 17. keep fit/healthy keep( in) good health
keep in good
condition/shape keep in a good state of health 18. with time going by /as time
goes by 19. take exercise 纠错:
1.exercise
everyday so that you will be much stronger. 2.remain a optimistic attitude towards
life
3.eat more
vegetables, which can strength your health. 4.in addition, have a balanced diet can
keep your health. 5.only if you believe in yourself you can carry on as normal. 6.take
good rest
7.under pressure
of study, not only do our lives affected, but also we are in poor condition.(两处
错)
8.last but not
least, remain optimistic is a good way to lift your spirits. 9.taking exercise
properly contributes to make you full of energy. 10.you should eat something which
agrees with you .
11.at the same
time, we are faced with much stress that results in many students can’t sleep well.
12.here are some
advice on how to solve it.
13.only you
ensure enough nutrition can you study better.
14.finally, keep
an optimistic attitude to life, it will be helpful in lifting your spirits.
15.write---_________---___________---____________(写出过去式,过去分词,现在分词)
occur---______________---______________---__________
篇二:建议信英语作文
英语
写作练习:a letter for advice
dear miss wang,
i’m a student
from guizhou experimental high school. i have a problem. i argued with my best friend
lisa for some very tiny things and said some bad words to her a few days ago. then,
we never talk to each other any more.now, i feel quite lonely sometimes and don’
t want to lose my best friend. i know she must be hurt by my words, and i am not sure
that she still want to be my friend or not? i do want to change this situation, but
i don’t know how. i would be grateful if you could give me some advice.
yours, jim what is jim’s problem? if you were miss wang, what would you say? dear jim, (写作模板) im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how
to (引出主题). here are a few suggestions. first, it is important
to . then, it also helps
to . besides,
it should be a good idea to .
you can also . (此三句不同的句式
提出建议) as to , i suggest (有时根据需要具体到某一反面). in addition, (其他建议). im sure (预测可能的结果,给对方以行动的信心和决心). im looking forward to (表达愿望).
sincerely yours,
miss wang
英语建议信格式提出建议常用句型i suggest that„ why not do„? why don’t you
do„? you would better do/ not do„ if i were you,i would„„ it seems
to me that you could„„ i think it would be more beneficial if you could„„
i feel that it would be beneficial if„ you may consider doing„ as you may
agree that i would like to suggest that„
英语建议信格式-
结尾常用句式
i hope that my
suggestions are helpful for your decision-making anyway.
i would be more
than happy to see improvement in this regard.
i believe that
you will take my suggestions into serious account.
i would be ready
to discuss about this matter with you to further details.
whatever you
decide to do, good luck with your studies/work! 写作中常用连接词:
(1)表选择关系或
对等关系的连接词:either„or„,neither„nor, or, as well as„, and, both„and„
(2)表因果关系或
对等关系的连接词:therefore, so, as a result, as the result of „,because of, due
to „,owing to, thanks to等。
(3)表时间顺序的
连接词:the moment, as soon as, at first, then, later, meanwhile, at the beginning,
in the end, before long, for the first(second„)time, the minute等。
(4)表转折关系的
连接词:yet, and yet, but , while, on the contrary, on the other hand, however, at
the same time(然而)等。
(5)表解释说明的
连接词:that is, that is to say, in other words, such as, for instance, and so on,
etc. and the like等。
(6)表递进关系的
连接词:not only„but (also), what’s more, whats worse, besides, in addition, worse
still, moreover, above all等。
(7)表示总结的连
接词:in a word, on the whole, in short, briefly, in brief, to sum up, in all 练
习:假定你是李华,你的英国朋友peter来信向你咨询如何才能学好中文。请你根据下列要
点写回信。 要点:⑴ 参加中文学习班;⑵ 看中文书刊、电视; ⑶ 学唱中文歌曲; ⑷ 交
中国朋友。
注意:可适当增加
细节,以使行文连贯;开头语已给出。
dear peter,
best wishes,
li hua
篇三:高中英语作文 建议信(如何学英语)
写作
假如你是李华,你
刚收到了你的朋友王梅的电子邮件,她在邮件里向你询问在高中如何学好英语。请你根据下
列的内容给她写封回信。
1. 上课认真听讲,
做好笔记,课后及时复习;
2. 词汇是基础,每
天早上花半个小时的时间背诵单词,朗读课文;
3. 课外多与同学
用英语交流,提高听力和口语能力;
4. 每天坚持写日
记。
注意:1.词数120
—150词左右,短文的开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总数;
2.内容可适当发挥,
注意行文连贯。
dear wang mei,
i’m very glad to
have received your e-mail.
best wishes!
yours,
li hua
dear wang mei,
i’m very glad to
have received your e-mail.now i’m writing to give you some advice on how to learn
english well in high school. first of all,you should listen to the teacher carefully
and take notes in class so that 众所周知),vocabulary is of great importance /
essential.you should spend half an hour in the morning reciting words and reading
texts aloud.what’s more,try to your classmates in english out of class.in this way
you can improve your listening and spoken english quickly.last but not least,you
should keeping a diary,which helps improve your written english and helps you go
over/review the words and expressions that you have learnt.
i hope these
suggestions will be of use to you.remember:where there is a will,there is a way. 有
志者事竟成 /the man who has made up his mind to win will never say “impossible”.
一个决心要成功的人是从来不会说“不可能的”。
best wishes!
yours, li hua
篇四:高中英语建议信作文
dear
peter, here are a few suggestions. first, it is important to take a chinese course,
as youll be able to learn from the teachers and practice with your fellow students.
then, it also helps to watch tv and read books, newspapers, and magazines in chinese
whenever possible. besides, it should be a good idea to learn and sing chinese songs,
because by doing so youll learn and remember chinese words more easily. in addition,
you can also make more chinese friends. they will tell you a lot about china and help
you learn chinese.
try writing to me
in chinese next time.
写作注意问题
? 一是单词拼写要
正确,大小写等。开头结尾部分的语法要正确。 ? 二是选择多种表达方式,例如给出的不同
的提建议的句式。 ? 三是结构要清晰,三段式,有过渡词。
? 四是卷面要整洁。
? 五是字数要够,
答题卡上划得横线部分尽量写满,最多剩一行
篇五:2015英语作文常用句型及建议信的模板
1.
重点句型
1). it’s adj for
sb to do 做„对某人来说
2). „ so „
that „ 如此„ 以至于„
„ too „ to do
太„ 而不能„
such „ that „
如此„ 以至于„
3). not„until„
直到„才„ 例: i didn’t go to bed until my mother came back.
4).the reason why
+ 句子 is that + 句子 „ 的原因是„
例:the reason why
he got angry was that she told him a lie.
5). that is why +
句子 那是„的原因
6). that is
because + 句子 那是因为„
7). it is said
that + 句子 据说„ 例:it is reported that + 句子 据报道„
8). there is no
doubt that + 句子 毫无疑问„
9). it goes
without saying that + 句子 不言而喻,毫无疑问
10). there is no
need to do 没必要做„
11). there is no
point in doing 做某事毫无意义
12).as is known
to all, +句子 众所周知
as we all know,
+句子 据我们所知
it is generally/ publicly known / considered that„, 众所周知
13) find it + adj
to do„ 觉得/发现做„ 是„的。
例︰i find it
necessary to take down notes while listening.
14) not only„but
also 不但„而且.....
例︰in just three
years, she had not only finished all the lessons, but also received her doctor’s
degree.
15)in order to
为了.... 例︰he worked very hard in order to realize his dream. 19) 就我的
看法„„;我认为„„in my opinion, as far as i’m concerned
20) 随着人口的增
加„„ with the increase/growth of the population, „
随着科技的进
步„„ with the advance of science and technology, „
21). since + s +
过去式, s + 现在完成式.
to senior high school, he has worked very hard.
2.
1.had
do 最好(不)做
2.how
what about doing „怎么样?
3.i
should do 我认为你应该„
4.i
advice that you should do 我建议你做„
5.if
would do„ 我要是你的话,我会做„
6.it’s best to do 最好做„
7.why
don’t you do„? 为什么不„
3.
兴趣
1.like
doing 2.enjoy doing
3.be
doing 喜欢做„ 4.be keen on n/doing 喜欢做„
5.prefer to do a
rather than do b 宁愿做a也不愿做b
6.be
in doing = show/ take great interest in n / doing
4.
1.try to do
做„ 2.strive to do 努力做„
3.try
to do = do one’s best to do 竭尽全力做„
4.make 例:since he t 提建议 better (not) about / think you suggest / i were you, i not do / why 表示喜欢和感/ love fond of interested 努力做„ 努力one’s best efforts to
do = make every effort to do 尽力做„
5.do what sb can
(do ) to do 尽力做„
6.spare no effort
to do 不遗余力的做„
7.do what /
everything sb. can to do 尽某人全力做„
5. 打算做„ / 计
划做„
1.intend
to do 打算做„ 2.be going to do 打算做„
3.decide
决定做„ 4.determine to do决定做„
5.be determined to do决定做„ 6.make up one’s mind to do
6.
1.want
would like to do 想做„ 2.hope to do 希望做„
3.expect
期待着做„ 4.wish to do 希望做„
5.consider doing
考虑做„
7.
宾语的动词
1.finish
practice 练习 suggest建议 consider 考虑
mind
enjoy 喜欢 +doing
2.
look
doing 盼望做„ keep on doing 坚持做„
dream
想做„ can’t help doing 情不自禁地做„
keep
prevent sb. from doing 阻止某人做„
be
doing be busy with + 名词 忙于做„
spend
money (in )doing spend time / money on + 名词 花费时间做„
a good time / enjoy oneself doing 玩得开心
have
have problem / have difficulty (in) doing
做„有困难 / plan to do 下定决心做„ 表示想/希望 to do= to do 只加doing 作完成 介意 固定句型 forward to of doing 梦/ stop / busy (in ) time / trouble / 或 with + 名词 have fun / have
8.学习用定语从句
先行词+关系词+定语从句
高中英语满分书信作文模板——建议信
dear ______,
①you have asked
me for my advice about ______ , and i will try to make some suggestions here.
②in my opinion,
_____(建议的内容).
③i would
appreciate it very much if you could consider my suggestions.i will be looking forward
to your reply.
yours sincerely,
li ming
高中英语满分书信
作文模板——请求信
dear ______ ,
①i am writing
ask to _____(请求的内容).
②could you
please ___________-②would you mind ___________③i wonder if you could___________
⑥thank you for your attention to these requests.. ⑧i look forward to a favorable
reply.
yours sincerely,
li ming
高中英语满分书信
作文模板——询问信
dear ______ ,
①i am ______(自
我介绍). ②i am writing to see if it is possible for you to provide me with information
regarding ______(要询问的内容).
③first of all,
what are ______(第一个问题)? ④secondly, when will ______(第二个问题)? ⑤
thirdly, is ______(第三个问题)?
⑥i would also
like to inquire ______(将最重要的问题单独成段). ⑦could you be so kind as to send
me some relevant booklets on the above-mentioned aspects?
⑧thank you for
you kindness, and your prompt attention to this letter will be highly appreciated.
yours sincerely,
li ming
假设你是新华中学的学生张华,班里从外地转来一名同学李明,他一时无法融入新的班集体
中,感到很苦恼。
作文七:《高中英语作文--建议信》12800字建议信(1)-----阐释原因;提出建议类
请你代表你班同学给校长写一封信,反映一下你校食堂的几点问题,以引起学校重视,并针对问题提出两条合理建议。问题包括:
1. 菜价昂贵,菜市单一;2. 排队时间长,浪费午休时间;3. 味道不佳,浪费现象严重。
注意:1. 词数不少于120; 2. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;3. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 参考词汇: 食堂 canteen Dear Principal,
Recently, many students are discussing the problems of the canteen. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I sincerely hope you can adopt my suggestions. Thank you!
Yours, Li Hua
作文范文: Dear Principal,
Some students think the prices of the dishes are too high and that the choices are too limited. Another concern is that the time spent in waiting is so long that we have less time to have a rest. Meanwhile, some students think that the taste of the food is awful, which leads to a lot of waste. the prices be more reasonable and the choices of dishes be more various.需注意的词汇、表达:
1. delicious waiting taste(n.味道) tasty (adj.可口的) cook (n.厨师) cooker (n.炊具)
price 价格
2. lower /bring down the price 降低价格 3. at a lower/reasonable price 以较低的价格 4. varieties of dishes 种类多样的菜品 5. For one thing,……. For another,……
6. make sb (not)do sth
7. wait /stand in line / in a queue for a long time 8. The kinds of food are . 表达食堂出现的问题:
9. The prices of dishes are so high that many of us can’t afford them.
10. There are so few dishes to choose from, which is far from satisfactory. / which can’t satisfy our
needs.
11. It takes us so much time to stand in line, which decreases our time of rest at noon. 12. The food in the canteen doesn’t taste .
The taste of food in the canteen isn’t
13. The food in the canteen tastes so bad that a lot of food is left and wasted 14. It’s a waste of time to stand in line for a long time.
15. The food in the canteen tastes so bad, which leads to a severe phenomenon of wasting food. 16. In the long run, it’s bad for our health and study.
17. It goes without saying that it will influence our sleep in the afternoon. 表达提出的建议:
18. Improving the taste of the food is also a good solution to the problems. 19. I think it’s necessary to provide more kinds of food. 20. It’s high time that we took measures to solve the problems.
So it’s high time for us to take measures
21. To solve the problems, I think the canteen should set up a new figure(形象) and improve the
present condition to satisfy the students’ needs.
22. We hope the canteen can provide us with dishes of a high quality at a reasonable price. 23. The canteen should open more windows so that we needn’t wait so long.
24. As far as I’m concerned, the canteen should attach importance to the quality. What’s more,
different kinds of food should be provided.
25. Measures are supposed to be taken to improve the conditions of the canteen.
建议模板: Dear ….,
I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to…….(引出话题). Here are a few suggestions. First of all, it is important to do sth. Then, it also helps to do sth. Besides, it should be a good idea to do sth.
建议句型积累:
1. Many ways can contribute to solving the problem, but I think the following may be the most
effective ones.
2. I’d like to make some suggestions on ……. 3. It’s of great importance for sb to do sth.
It’s necessary for sb to do sth
4. It would be a good idea for sb to do sth. / It would be a better idea if……. 5. It contributes /helps a lot if ……… 6. I suggest that …../ My suggestion is that …
It’s suggested / advised / remended that…… 7. You’d better do sth./ We’d better do sth
It’s better to do sth
8. Measures are supposed to be taken to do sth
We are supposed to take effective measures to do sth 9. It’s high time that sb sth. / It’s high time for sb to do sth
建议信(2)-----阐释原因;提出建议类
假定你是中学生李华。在一位名叫Sad Mother的学生家长的博客上,你看到如下内容。请你根据博客内容、写作要点和要求,用英语给这位家长回复。
I’m the mother of a fourteen-year-old. Recently I have found that my daughter told lies to me. The other day she told me that she did well in the final exam. However I found out she failed in math and English. What should I do?
写作要点:
1.表明了解她的问题; 2.帮她分析孩子撒谎的原因; 3.提出至少两条建议 要求:
1.短文须写在答题卡的指定区域。 2.短文词数不少于100(不含已写好的部分)。 3.内容充实,结构完整,语意连贯。 4.书写需清晰、工整。
Hi,Sad Mother,
I have learned that_____________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
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作文范文: Hi,Sad Mother,
she is afraid you will punish her if she tells you the truth. Besides, nowadays, parents put too much pressure on their kids. In order not to let you down, she lie .
–heart talk with her, making her know being honest is more important than scores. In addition, don’t be too strict.微小的) mistakes.
需要注意积累的词汇、短语、和句子:
daughter女儿 expectation 期望 be worried / concerned about 担心 calm down 冷静下来 at a loss 迷惑不解 keep in touch with 保持联系 be strict with sb in sth 在某方面对某人要求严格 heart-to-heart 推心置腹的
idea 注意想法 test 测试 text 文本 cheat 欺骗 want sb to do sth 想让某人做某事
1. It was because she didn’t want to let you down that she pretended to achieve high scores. 2. She isn’t aware that the lies have hurt both you and herself.
3. Being a teenager, she needs to be encouraged. And it’s you who can do this. 4. It is probably your high expectations to her that makes her decide to lie.
5. You should figure out the reason why she lied to you before solving the problem. 6. It goes without saying that lying is bad behavior.
7. The reason why she didn’t tell you the truth may be that she didn’t want to let you down.
8. It is suggested that you should have a face-to-face talk with her so that she might open her heart to you.
9. To avoid the lies, you should encourage her rather than blame her when she fails in exams 10. The reason that leads to the problem may be various.
11. Confronted with (面对) these problems, you should take a series of effective measures to help you daughter.
12. As far as I’m concerned, it’s better to municate with her in a friendly way to let her know it’s wrong to tell lies.
13. It’s suggested that you should attach more importance to physical and mental health. Moreover, it’s better to encourage her to do what she wants. 改错:
1. There are some advice.
2. Don’t sad.
3. You should give her more encourage.
4. She may afraid that if she fails in the exam, you will punish her.
5. If she has difficulty in learning, you should inspire she and help she out. 6. She doesn’t want you angry. 7. Please not to be so worried.
8. One of the reason is that she isn’t dare to tell you the truth. 9. Because she afraid parents.
10. So she don’t want to mention it. 11. You should apology to her.
12. You’d better to encourage her to be a honest people. 13. You’d better be care about her health and study. 14. I’m very understand your condition. 15. She may doesn’t want you to be angry.
建议信(3)
为了帮助中学生健康成长,某中学英文报开辟了“HEART-TO-HEART”专栏。假设你是该栏目的编辑Jamie,收到一封署名为Worried的求助信。信中该同学向你诉说了自己的困扰:近日容易发脾气,使正常的学习和生活受到了影响。请用英文给该同学写一封回信。 内容要点如下:
1.表示理解并给予安慰; 2.提出建议并说明理由。 注意:
1.词数120左右;
2.信中不能出现与本人相关的信息;
3.信的开头与结尾已为你拟好,不计入总词数。 参考词汇:temper n. 脾气,情绪 Hi Worried,
I’m sorry to know that you’re having such a had time at the moment.
Yours, Jamie Hi Worried,
I'm sorry to know that you're having such a bad time at the moment. The truth is that everyone will have one of those periods when things seem to be going wrong, I quite understand how you are feeling now and there is no need to worry about it so much. The important thing is to learn to control your temper so that you may not do or say anything you’ll regret. Here are three useful tips.
First of all, talk to someone you trust about the trouble you’re faced with, which is a good way of letting your anger out without hurting others or yourself. Second, go outdoors and play team games with your friends as physical exercise is an effective way to get rid of anger. Last but not least, remain optimistic about your future. Having a positive attitude towards life can be helpful in lifting your spirits. I hope you'll soon bee calmer and better.
Yours, Jamie
Highlights:
1. First, you are supposed to figure out what makes you upset,and then keep away from it. 2. What’s more, you are supposed to take an active part in outdoor activities to relax.
3. To solve the problem as soon as possible, you can open your heart to a good friend, talking about
your trouble.
4. Carried by two, burdens are lighter.
5. It’s high time that you should relieve your pressure.
6. Measures are supposed to be taken to control your temper.
7. There is no denying that everyone will lose his temper when something unexpected happens. 8. Instead of being angry, what is important for you is to learn to control your temper from now on.
9. It’s mon for teenagers like you to lose your temper, which of course will have a bad effect on your normal study and life.
建议信(4)
高二下期已经过去半学期,高三已经在向同学们招手。随着学习和心理压力日益加大,一些同学的正常生活受到影响,如睡眠不好,身体也开始亮起了红灯。请你根据以下要点,给学校的英语刊物写一篇稿子,向同学们提出建议,并简述理由或举例说明:
1、劳逸结合; 2、健康饮食; 3、适当锻炼; 4、保持乐观心态。 注意:1、短文必须包括所列内容;2、词数120左右;
3、文章开头已给出; 4、写成一篇完整的短文,不要逐条列举。
作文范文:
preventing them sleeping well and causing problems with their health. In order to improve the condition, I’d like to offer some advice.
First, Combine work with rest. Keep in mind that all work and no play makes Jack a dull boy. Second, it is important to keep a healthy and balanced diet. Staying away from junk food and eating healthy food like vegetables and fish will benefit you. Third, go outdoors and take regular exercise, as physical exercise is an effective way to get rid of pressure. Last but not least, good health means being both physically and mentally healthy. Keeping an optimistic state of mind will contribute to a good physical state.
I sincerely hope that the suggestions above will be of great help to you. 句型及短语积累: 1. My advice is as follows. 2. The following is my advice.
3. Finally, remain optimistic about your future. Such a positive attitude towards life can be helpful in lifting your spirits.
4. Then it also helps to take proper exercise. Not only can it strengthen your health, but also it can make you feel relaxed.
5. Go outdoors and play team games with your friends as it is an effective way to keep healthy. 6. Second, you may as well take some exercise, which is a good way to keep healthy.
7. Third, go outdoors and take exercise. Not only can it help students keep healthy, but also it is a good way to reduce pressure.
8. First of all, I think it is a good idea to bine study and a good rest, which can help us keep energetic and active.
9. Second, you are supposed to eat healthy food as it will offer students enough energy.
10. In addition, you must eat healthy food so as to keep fit, which is of great importance to your study. 11. As an old saying goes, “All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy”.
12. Gone are the days when we were at senior 2 and the senior 3 is saying hello to us.
13. Go out to breathe fresh air and relax your brain.
14. Keeping a healthy diet is essential to you, which helps you keep fit.
15. The most important thing I think is to seek for the balance between study and pleasure.
16. keep a balance between study and relaxation 17. keep fit/healthy keep( in) good health
keep in good condition/shape keep in a good state of health 18. with time going by /as time goes by 19. take exercise 纠错:
1.Exercise everyday so that you will be much stronger. 2.remain a optimistic attitude towards life
3.Eat more vegetables, which can strength your health. 4.In addition, have a balanced diet can keep your health. 5.Only if you believe in yourself you can carry on as normal. 6.take good rest
7.Under pressure of study, not only do our lives affected, but also we are in poor condition.(两处错)
8.Last but not least, remain optimistic is a good way to lift your spirits. 9.Taking exercise properly contributes to make you full of energy. 10.You should eat something which agrees with you .
11.At the same time, we are faced with much stress that results in many students can’t sleep well.
12.Here are some advice on how to solve it.
13.Only you ensure enough nutrition can you study better.
14.Finally, keep an optimistic attitude to life, it will be helpful in lifting your spirits. 15.write---_________---___________---____________(写出过去式,过去分词,现在分词) occur---______________---______________---__________
作文八:《考研英语作文建议信》1100字考研英语作文建议信
一、信函写作:称呼、正文、落款
1、审题—-判断是个人书信&事务公函
决定:
语域使用:正式:使用礼貌表达,不用缩略语(对公)
半正式:可以使用缩略和口语表达(对私)
非正式:(一般不考)——It depends
呼语: 特定的写信对象:Dear XX
不明确收信人:2、正文
三段(8句)3、各种信函内容安排
1)建议信:2007年及2009年
A.基本结构
第一段: ;
第二段: 第三段:
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
B.2007年Part A 真题及解析(建议信)
Directions:
Write a letter to your university library, making suggestions for improving its service. You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2.
Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use “Li Ming” instead. Do not write the address.
To Whom It May Concern,
I am a student in this university who regularly es to the library to spend my spare time. Generally speaking, the services you offer here are quite good; however, I have some suggestions for you to adopt. And I would like to extend my greatest appreciation if you are so kind as to take my suggestions into consideration. To begin with, will you please prolong the time for reading? In the daytime, most of the students are having classes, so they can’t e to the library. Moreover, some of the books on shelves are out of date. If you are so kind as to provide us consideration.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
C.建议信框架
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
作文九:《建议信的英语作文》21800字篇一:2015英语作文常用句型及建议信的模板
1.
重点句型
1). it’s adj for
sb to do 做„对某人来说
2). „ so „
that „ 如此„ 以至于„
„ too „ to do
太„ 而不能„
such „ that „
如此„ 以至于„
3). not„until„
直到„才„ 例: i didn’t go to bed until my mother came back.
4).the reason why
+ 句子 is that + 句子 „ 的原因是„
例:the reason why
he got angry was that she told him a lie.
5). that is why +
句子 那是„的原因
6). that is
because + 句子 那是因为„
7). it is said
that + 句子 据说„ 例:it is reported that + 句子 据报道„
8). there is no
doubt that + 句子 毫无疑问„
9). it goes
without saying that + 句子 不言而喻,毫无疑问
10). there is no
need to do 没必要做„
11). there is no
point in doing 做某事毫无意义
12).as is known
to all, +句子 众所周知
as we all know,
+句子 据我们所知
it is generally/ publicly known / considered that„, 众所周知
13) find it + adj
to do„ 觉得/发现做„ 是„的。
例︰i find it
necessary to take down notes while listening.
14) not only„but
also 不但„而且.....
例︰in just three
years, she had not only finished all the lessons, but also received her doctor’s
degree.
15)in order to
为了.... 例︰he worked very hard in order to realize his dream. 19) 就我的
看法„„;我认为„„in my opinion, as far as i’m concerned
20) 随着人口的增
加„„ with the increase/growth of the population, „
随着科技的进
步„„ with the advance of science and technology, „
21). since + s +
过去式, s + 现在完成式.
to senior high school, he has worked very hard.
2.
1.had
do 最好(不)做
2.how
what about doing „怎么样?
3.i
should do 我认为你应该„
4.i
advice that you should do 我建议你做„
5.if
would do„ 我要是你的话,我会做„
6.it’s best to do 最好做„
7.why
don’t you do„? 为什么不„
3.
兴趣
1.like
doing 2.enjoy doing
3.be
doing 喜欢做„ 4.be keen on n/doing 喜欢做„
5.prefer to do a
rather than do b 宁愿做a也不愿做b
6.be
in doing = show/ take great interest in n / doing
4.
1.try to do
做„ 2.strive to do 努力做„
3.try
to do = do one’s best to do 竭尽全力做„
4.make 例:since he t 提建议 better (not) about / think you suggest / i were you, i not do / why 表示喜欢和感/ love fond of interested 努力做„ 努力one’s best efforts to
do = make every effort to do 尽力做„
5.do what sb can
(do ) to do 尽力做„
6.spare no effort
to do 不遗余力的做„
7.do what /
everything sb. can to do 尽某人全力做„
5. 打算做„ / 计
划做„
1.intend
to do 打算做„ 2.be going to do 打算做„
3.decide
决定做„ 4.determine to do决定做„
5.be determined to do决定做„ 6.make up one’s mind to do
6.
1.want
would like to do 想做„ 2.hope to do 希望做„
3.expect
期待着做„ 4.wish to do 希望做„
5.consider doing
考虑做„
7.
宾语的动词
1.finish
practice 练习 suggest建议 consider 考虑
mind
enjoy 喜欢 +doing
2.
look
doing 盼望做„ keep on doing 坚持做„
dream
想做„ can’t help doing 情不自禁地做„
keep
prevent sb. from doing 阻止某人做„
be
doing be busy with + 名词 忙于做„
spend
money (in )doing spend time / money on + 名词 花费时间做„
a good time / enjoy oneself doing 玩得开心
have
have problem / have difficulty (in) doing
做„有困难 / plan to do 下定决心做„ 表示想/希望 to do= to do 只加doing 作完成 介意 固定句型 forward to of doing 梦/ stop / busy (in ) time / trouble / 或 with + 名词 have fun / have
8.学习用定语从句
先行词+关系词+定语从句
高中英语满分书信作文模板——建议信
dear ______,
①you have asked
me for my advice about ______ , and i will try to make some suggestions here.
②in my opinion,
_____(建议的内容).
③i would
appreciate it very much if you could consider my suggestions.i will be looking forward
to your reply.
yours sincerely,
li ming
高中英语满分书信
作文模板——请求信
dear ______ ,
①i am writing
ask to _____(请求的内容).
②could you
please ___________-②would you mind ___________③i wonder if you could___________
⑥thank you for your attention to these requests.. ⑧i look forward to a favorable
reply.
yours sincerely,
li ming
高中英语满分书信
作文模板——询问信
dear ______ ,
①i am ______(自
我介绍). ②i am writing to see if it is possible for you to provide me with information
regarding ______(要询问的内容).
③first of all,
what are ______(第一个问题)? ④secondly, when will ______(第二个问题)? ⑤
thirdly, is ______(第三个问题)?
⑥i would also
like to inquire ______(将最重要的问题单独成段). ⑦could you be so kind as to send
me some relevant booklets on the above-mentioned aspects?
⑧thank you for
you kindness, and your prompt attention to this letter will be highly appreciated.
yours sincerely,
li ming
假设你是新华中学的学生张华,班里从外地转来一名同学李明,他一时无法融入新的班集体
中,感到很苦恼。请根据下列要点用英语给他写封信:
☆帮他分析原因
☆给他提出建议
☆陈述你帮助他的
具体打算
篇二:建议信英语作文
英语
写作练习:a letter for advice
dear miss wang,
i’m a student
from guizhou experimental high school. i have a problem. i argued with my best friend
lisa for some very tiny things and said some bad words to her a few days ago. then,
we never talk to each other any more.now, i feel quite lonely sometimes and don’
t want to lose my best friend. i know she must be hurt by my words, and i am not sure
that she still want to be my friend or not? i do want to change this situation, but
i don’t know how. i would be grateful if you could give me some advice.
yours, jim what is jim’s problem? if you were miss wang, what would you say? dear jim, (写作模板) im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how
to (引出主题). here are a few suggestions. first, it is important
to . then, it also helps
to . besides,
it should be a good idea to .
you can also . (此三句不同的句式
提出建议) as to , i suggest (有时根据需要具体到某一反面). in addition, (其他建议). im sure (预测可能的结果,给对方以行动的信心和决心). im looking forward to (表达愿望).
sincerely yours,
miss wang
英语建议信格式提出建议常用句型i suggest that„ why not do„? why don’t you
do„? you would better do/ not do„ if i were you,i would„„ it seems
to me that you could„„ i think it would be more beneficial if you could„„
i feel that it would be beneficial if„ you may consider doing„ as you may
agree that i would like to suggest that„
英语建议信格式-
结尾常用句式
i hope that my
suggestions are helpful for your decision-making anyway.
i would be more
than happy to see improvement in this regard.
i believe that
you will take my suggestions into serious account.
i would be ready
to discuss about this matter with you to further details.
whatever you
decide to do, good luck with your studies/work! 写作中常用连接词:
(1)表选择关系或
对等关系的连接词:either„or„,neither„nor, or, as well as„, and, both„and„
(2)表因果关系或
对等关系的连接词:therefore, so, as a result, as the result of „,because of, due
to „,owing to, thanks to等。
(3)表时间顺序的
连接词:the moment, as soon as, at first, then, later, meanwhile, at the beginning,
in the end, before long, for the first(second„)time, the minute等。
(4)表转折关系的
连接词:yet, and yet, but , while, on the contrary, on the other hand, however, at
the same time(然而)等。
(5)表解释说明的
连接词:that is, that is to say, in other words, such as, for instance, and so on,
etc. and the like等。
(6)表递进关系的
连接词:not only„but (also), what’s more, whats worse, besides, in addition, worse
still, moreover, above all等。
(7)表示总结的连
接词:in a word, on the whole, in short, briefly, in brief, to sum up, in all 练
习:假定你是李华,你的英国朋友peter来信向你咨询如何才能学好中文。请你根据下列要
点写回信。 要点:⑴ 参加中文学习班;⑵ 看中文书刊、电视; ⑶ 学唱中文歌曲; ⑷ 交
中国朋友。
注意:可适当增加
细节,以使行文连贯;开头语已给出。
dear peter,
best wishes,
li hua
篇三:英语 建议信 写作指导及模板
应用
文
建议信 (letter
of suggestion)
一、简介
(1) 建议信写作注
意事项
写作目的是提出建
议或忠告。不是投诉信,观点要合情合理,注意礼貌当
先。
(2) 写作方法
① 首段:
a. 简介自己,不要
罗嗦;
b. 说明目的,注意
语气。
② 主体:
a. 提出具体建议;
b. 首先肯定优点,
再写改进内容,否则变成投诉信;
c. 经常进行交流,
注意对方感受,时时提到你和我,否则容易跑题写成议论文,因为内容与议论文相似。
③ 尾段:总结建议,
注意礼貌,易于接受。
(3) 写作流程图
二、结构
第一部分:说明写
信的目的
套语:
(2) 写此信是要提出我对饭店管理进一步提高和改进的建议——建立我们自己
的网站来吸引更多
的客户。
i am writing to
you to present what i think on the further improvement of our
hotel so as to
establish a website of our own to attract more clients.
第二部分:介绍详情、提出建议
套语:
我建议„„
i’d like to
suggest that „„
may i suggest
that„„
in my
opinion „„
i am writing to
advise you of „„
if i were you, i
would „„
第三部分:提出希望采纳建议,盼望回复
套语:
(1) 请仔细考虑
我的建议,谢谢。
please take good
consideration of my advice. thanks.
三、示例
writing (30 minutes)
directions: for
this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a letter. suppose you are zhang
ying. write a letter to xiao wang, a schoolmate of yours who is going to visit you
during the summer holiday for a week. you should write at least 100 words according
to the suggestions given below in chinese.
1、表示欢迎。 2、
提出对度假安排的建议。 3、祝愿
建议信模板
dear ,
① i am very
______ to know that . ① 写信的原因 ② im looking forward to . ② 表示欢迎
③ im afraid that ③ 表述建议理由 ④ id like to suggest that first„„then _ . ④ 提
出建议
⑤ i believe this
kind of arrangement will________________ ⑤ 有说服力
⑥ moreover,if _____________ , ⑥ 补充建议
⑦ it is
necessary for you to . ⑦ 提出建议 ⑧
with_______________you will . ⑧ 建议理由
⑨
wish_____________________________ ⑨祝愿
a letter to a schoolmate
june 23rd, 2001
dear xiao wang,
that you are soon
if you can stay in beijing only for a week, 表明建议的原因 that you will have
a
tight schedule 语气亲切,符合说话人身份关系
historic
interest.
叙述词和副词
places that you such as 一目了然 the palace museum, the summer place(颐和园),
the great
wall; you can
visit those places you think less then使文章结构 important.
will make you
have enough time to appreciate(欣赏) 使自己的安排具有说服力 what you really
want to see. really want to be a good
about these
places, have a better
understanding of
chinese history and culture.
i am eager to meet
you soon in beijing.
in advance a
pleasant trip to beijing. 表达良好的祝愿,符合文体要求
best wishes!
yours ever,
篇四:高中英语作文--建议信
建议
信(1)-----阐释原因;提出建议类
请你代表你班同学
给校长写一封信,反映一下你校食堂的几点问题,以引起学校重视,并针对问题提出两条合
理建议。问题包括:
1. 菜价昂贵,菜市
单一;2. 排队时间长,浪费午休时间;3. 味道不佳,浪费现象严重。
注意:1. 词数不少
于120; 2. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;3. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 参
考词汇: 食堂 canteen dear principal,
recently, many
students are discussing the problems of the canteen.
________________________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________ i sincerely
hope you can adopt my suggestions. thank you!
yours, li hua
作文范文: dear
principal,
some students
think the prices of the dishes are too high and that the choices are too limited.
another concern is that the time spent in waiting is so long that we have less time to have a rest. meanwhile, some students think that the taste of the food is awful, which leads to a lot of waste. the prices be more reasonable and the choices of dishes be more various.需注意的词汇、表达:
1. delicious waiting taste(n.味道) tasty (adj.可口的) cook (n.厨师) cooker (n.炊具) price 价格
2. lower /bring down the price 降低价格 3. at a lower/reasonable price 以较低的价格 4. varieties of dishes 种类多样的菜品 5. for one thing,„„. for another,„„
6. make sb (not)do sth
7. wait /stand in line / in a queue for a long time 8. the kinds of food are . 表达食堂出现的问题:
9. the prices of dishes are so high that many of us can’t afford them.
10. there are so few dishes to choose from, which is far from satisfactory. / which can’t satisfy our
needs.
11. it takes us so much time to stand in line, which decreases our time of rest at noon. 12. the food in the canteen doesn’t taste .
the taste of food in the canteen isn’t
13. the food in the canteen tastes so bad that a lot of food is left and wasted 14. it’s a waste of time to stand in line for a long time.
15. the food in the canteen tastes so bad, which leads to a severe phenomenon of wasting food. 16. in the long run, it’s bad for our health and study.
17. it goes without saying that it will influence our sleep in the afternoon. 表达提出的建议:
18. improving the taste of the food is also a good solution to the problems. 19. i think it’s necessary to provide more kinds of food. 20. it’s high time that we took measures to solve the problems.
so it’s high time for us to take measures
21. to solve the problems, i think the canteen should set up a new figure(形象) and improve the present condition to satisfy the students’ needs.
22. we hope the
canteen can provide us with dishes of a high quality at a reasonable price. 23. the
canteen should open more windows so that we needn’t wait so long.
24. as far as i’
m concerned, the canteen should attach importance to the quality. what’s more,
different kinds
of food should be provided.
25. measures are
supposed to be taken to improve the conditions of the canteen.
建议模板:
dear „.,
i’m glad to
receive your letter asking for my advice on how to„„.(引出话题). here are a few
suggestions. first of all, it is important to do sth. then, it also helps to do sth.
besides, it should be a good idea to do sth.
建议句型积累:
1. many ways can contribute to solving the problem, but i think the following may
be the most
effective ones.
2. i’d like to
make some suggestions on „„. 3. it’s of great importance for sb to do sth.
it’s necessary
for sb to do sth
4. it would be a
good idea for sb to do sth. / it would be a better idea if„„. 5. it contributes
/helps a lot if „„„ 6. i suggest that „../ my suggestion is that „
it’s better to do
sth
8. measures are
supposed to be taken to do sth
we are supposed
to take effective measures to do sth 9. it’s high time that sb sth. / it’s high
time for sb to do sth
建议信(2)-----阐释原因;提出建议类
假定你是中学生李
华。在一位名叫sad mother的学生家长的博客上,你看到如下内容。请你根据博客内容、写
作要点和要求,用英语给这位家长回复。
i’m the mother of
a fourteen-year-old. recently i have found that my daughter told lies to me. the other
day she told me that she did well in the final exam. however i found out she failed
in math and english. what should i do?
写作要点:
1.表明了解她的问
题; 2.帮她分析孩子撒谎的原因; 3.提出至少两条建议 要求:
1.短文须写在答题
卡的指定区域。 2.短文词数不少于100(不含已写好的部分)。 3.内容充实,结构完整,
语意连贯。 4.书写需清晰、工整。
hi,sad mother,
i have learned
that_____________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
作文范文: hi,sad mother,
she is afraid you
will punish her if she tells you the truth. besides, nowadays, parents put too much
pressure on their kids. in order not to let you down, she lie .
–heart talk with
her, making her know being honest is more important than scores. in addition, don’
t be too strict.微小的) mistakes.
需要注意积累的词汇、短语、和句子:
daughter女儿 expectation 期望 be worried / concerned about 担心 calm down 冷
静下来 at a loss 迷惑不解 keep in touch with 保持联系 be strict with sb in sth 在
某方面对某人要求严格 heart-to-heart 推心置腹的
idea 注意想法
test 测试 text 文本 cheat 欺骗 want sb to do sth 想让某人做某事
1. it was because
she didn’t want to let you down that she pretended to achieve high scores. 2. she
isn’t aware that the lies have hurt both you and herself.
3. being a
teenager, she needs to be encouraged. and it’s you who can do this. 4. it is probably
your high expectations to her that makes her decide to lie.
5. you should
figure out the reason why she lied to you before solving the problem. 6. it goes without
saying that lying is bad behavior.
7. the reason why
she didn’t tell you the truth may be that she didn’t want to let you down.
8. it is
suggested that you should have a face-to-face talk with her so that she might open
her heart to you.
9. to avoid the
lies, you should encourage her rather than blame her when she fails in exams 10. the
reason that leads to the problem may be various.
11. confronted
with (面对) these problems, you should take a series of effective measures to help
you daughter.
13. it’s
suggested that you should attach more importance to physical and mental health.
moreover, it’s better to encourage her to do what she wants. 改错:
1. there are some
advice.
2. don’t sad.
3. you should
give her more encourage.
4. she may afraid
that if she fails in the exam, you will punish her.
5. if she has
difficulty in learning, you should inspire she and help she out. 6. she doesn’t want
you angry. 7. please not to be so worried.
8. one of the
reason is that she isn’t dare to tell you the truth. 9. because she afraid parents.
10. so she don’t
want to mention it. 11. you should apology to her.
12. you’d better
to encourage her to be a honest people. 13. you’d better be care about her health
and study. 14. i’m very understand your condition. 15. she may doesn’t want you
to be angry.
建议信(3)
为了帮助中学生健
康成长,某中学英文报开辟了“heart-to-heart”专栏。假设你是该栏目的编辑jamie,收
到一封署名为worried的求助信。信中该同学向你诉说了自己的困扰:近日容易发脾气,使
正常的学习和生活受到了影响。请用英文给该同学写一封回信。 内容要点如下:
1.表示理解并给予
安慰; 2.提出建议并说明理由。 注意:
1.词数120左右;
2.信中不能出现与
本人相关的信息;
3.信的开头与结尾
已为你拟好,不计入总词数。 参考词汇:temper n. 脾气,情绪 hi worried,
i’m sorry to know
that you’re having such a had time at the moment.
yours, jamie hi worried,
im sorry to know
that youre having such a bad time at the moment. the truth is that everyone will have
one of those periods when things seem to be going wrong, i quite understand how you
are feeling now and there is no need to worry about it so much. the important thing
is to learn to control your temper so that you may not do or say anything you’ll
regret. here are three useful tips.
yours, jamie
highlights:
1. first, you are
supposed to figure out what makes you upset,and then keep away from it. 2. what’
s more, you are supposed to take an active part in outdoor activities to relax.
3. to solve the
problem as soon as possible, you can open your heart to a good friend, talking about
your trouble.
4. carried by two,
burdens are lighter.
5. it’s high time
that you should relieve your pressure.
6. measures are
supposed to be taken to control your temper.
7. there is no
denying that everyone will lose his temper when something unexpected happens. 8.
instead of being angry, what is important for you is to learn to control your temper
from now on.
建议信(4)
高二下期已经过去
半学期,高三已经在向同学们招手。随着学习和心理压力日益加大,一些同学的正常生活受
到影响,如睡眠不好,身体也开始亮起了红灯。请你根据以下要点,给学校的英语刊物写一
篇稿子,向同学们提出建议,并简述理由或举例说明:
1、劳逸结合; 2、
健康饮食; 3、适当锻炼; 4、保持乐观心态。 注意:1、短文必须包括所列内容;2、词
数120左右;
3、文章开头已给出;
4、写成一篇完整的短文,不要逐条列举。
作文范文:
preventing them
sleeping well and causing problems with their health. in order to improve the
condition, i’d like to offer some advice.
i sincerely hope
that the suggestions above will be of great help to you. 句型及短语积累: 1. my advice
is as follows. 2. the following is my advice.
3. finally,
remain optimistic about your future. such a positive attitude towards life can be
helpful in lifting your spirits.
4. then it also
helps to take proper exercise. not only can it strengthen your health, but also it
can make you feel relaxed.
5. go outdoors
and play team games with your friends as it is an effective way to keep healthy. 6.
second, you may as well take some exercise, which is a good way to keep healthy.
7. third, go
outdoors and take exercise. not only can it help students keep healthy, but also it
is a good way to reduce pressure.
9. second, you
are supposed to eat healthy food as it will offer students enough energy.
10. in addition,
you must eat healthy food so as to keep fit, which is of great importance to your
study. 11. as an old saying goes, “all work and no play makes jack a dull boy”.
12. gone are the
days when we were at senior 2 and the senior 3 is saying hello to us.
13. go out to
breathe fresh air and relax your brain.
14. keeping a
healthy diet is essential to you, which helps you keep fit.
15. the most
important thing i think is to seek for the balance between study and pleasure.
16. keep a
balance between study and relaxation 17. keep fit/healthy keep( in) good health
keep in good
condition/shape keep in a good state of health 18. with time going by /as time
goes by 19. take exercise 纠错:
1.exercise
everyday so that you will be much stronger. 2.remain a optimistic attitude towards
life
3.eat more
vegetables, which can strength your health. 4.in addition, have a balanced diet can
keep your health. 5.only if you believe in yourself you can carry on as normal. 6.take
good rest
7.under pressure
of study, not only do our lives affected, but also we are in poor condition.(两处
错)
8.last but not
least, remain optimistic is a good way to lift your spirits. 9.taking exercise
properly contributes to make you full of energy. 10.you should eat something which
agrees with you .
11.at the same
time, we are faced with much stress that results in many students can’t sleep well.
12.here are some
advice on how to solve it.
13.only you
ensure enough nutrition can you study better.
14.finally, keep
an optimistic attitude to life, it will be helpful in lifting your spirits.
15.write---_________---___________---____________(写出过去式,过去分词,现在分词)
occur---______________---______________---__________
篇五:高中英语作文 建议信(如何学英语)
写作
假如你是李华,你
刚收到了你的朋友王梅的电子邮件,她在邮件里向你询问在高中如何学好英语。请你根据下
列的内容给她写封回信。
1. 上课认真听讲,
做好笔记,课后及时复习;
2. 词汇是基础,每
天早上花半个小时的时间背诵单词,朗读课文;
3. 课外多与同学
用英语交流,提高听力和口语能力;
4. 每天坚持写日
记。
注意:1.词数120
—150词左右,短文的开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总数;
2.内容可适当发挥,
注意行文连贯。
dear wang mei,
i’m very glad to
have received your e-mail.
best wishes!
yours,
li hua
dear wang mei,
i’m very glad to
have received your e-mail.now i’m writing to give you some advice on how to learn
english well in high school. first of all,you should listen to the teacher carefully
and take notes in class so that 众所周知),vocabulary is of great importance /
essential.you should spend half an hour in the morning reciting words and reading
texts aloud.what’s more,try to your classmates in english out of class.in this way
you can improve your listening and spoken english quickly.last but not least,you
should keeping a diary,which helps improve your written english and helps you go
over/review the words and expressions that you have learnt.
i hope these
suggestions will be of use to you.remember:where there is a will,there is a way. 有
志者事竟成 /the man who has made up his mind to win will never say “impossible”.
一个决心要成功的人是从来不会说“不可能的”。
作文十:《建议信-高考英语作文》4800字高考二轮复习----A Letter of Suggestion
建议信是向别人提出合理的建议,让对方接受自己的想法、主张,解决有关问题。建议信不是投诉信,观点要合情合理,注意礼貌当先。同时,建议信要简洁明确、理由充足,具有合理性和说服力。通常包括:
1. 说明写信目的; 2. 提出建议与改进措施并给予忠告; 3. 表达希望采纳建议并期盼回复。
一 常用语块
1. 给某人提建议 _______________________ 2. 如下 ________________________ 3. 在做某事时遇到困难 _______________________ 4. 利用 ________________________ 5. 向某人征求意见 ________________________ 6. 制订计划 _______________________ 7. 认为……有用 _______________________ 8. 参加 _______________________
9. 听从某人的建议 _______________________ 10. 把……考虑在内 __________________
11. 得到改善 ________________________ 12. 有所好转 ________________________ 13. 依我看来 ________________________ 14. 我已收到你的来信,得知你……
________________________
15. 我建议…… ________________________
二 套用句式翻译 开头
1我很高兴收到你的来信,问我关于……的问题
2我很高兴收到你的来信,我很荣幸告诉你关于……的问题
3然而如果你采取我的意见,这个情形很容易改变,这是给你的一些建议
4在下认为, 如果你能采取以下措施,将是一种明智的选择。
中间
5…做……是个好主意 6……你也可以做…… 7我认为,如果你能做……很更有 8我个人认为,你做……是很明智的 9如果我是你,我会做…… 结尾
10我相信你会认真考虑我的建议的 11如果这方面有所改善我会非常开心的 12我希望你能觉得这些建议有用 13我希望你能在……方面取得进步 14.我准备好和你进一步讨论这个问题的细节。
假定你是李华,请根据所给材料,给Lora写一封回信。要点如下:
1. 对Lora打算利用暑假打工表示理解。2. 猜测Lora父母不同意的理由。 3. 你给Lora的具体建议。注意:1. 词数100左右。
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 3. 开头语和结束语已为你写好。 Dear Lora,
I have just read your letter in the magazine. I know that you want to work part-time this summer. But your parents don’t allow you to do so. I understand your situation.
I think your parents may have their reasons. They may regard learning as the most important task for you. Perhaps they’d like you to make use of this summer holiday to study. Besides, they may think you are too young to work.
I think you had better have a talk with your parents. If they agree, you should make a detailed plan for your study and work, ask your friends to work together with you, and tell your parents not to worry about you because you are old enough to manage things properly.
Anyway, I would be more than happy to wish you a pleasant summer.
Yours truly, Li Hua
四 第二节:书面表达(满分25分)
假如你的朋友李华已经在美国留学三年, 现在正面临着毕业后是留在美国还是回到中国的问题。请你用英语给他写一封信,给出你的建议并写清原因。
要求:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 Dear Li Hua,
Yours, Wang Wei
Keys
1 give sb. some advice (on) 2 as follows
3 have difficulty/trouble in doing sth
4 make use of 5 ask sb. for advice 6 make a plan
7 find…helpful/useful/beneficial 8 take part in/participate in 9 follow one’s advice 、
10 take sth. into account/consideration 11 get improved 12 change for the better
13 in my opinion/in my view/from my point of view 14 I have received your letter saying that you…
15 I would like to suggest that…/I would like to make a remendation that…/I am writing to advise you of…/If I were you, I would…/May I suggest that…/I would like to put forward the suggestion that… 开头
我很高兴收到你的来信,问我关于……的问题
I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on ……. 我很高兴收到你的来信,我很荣幸告诉你关于……的问题
I’m very glad to receive your letter and it’s a pleasure to tell you something about……
.然而如果你采取我的意见,这个情形很容易改变,这是给你的一些建议
However, the situation is easy to change if you take my advice. Here are some tips to help you. / Here are a few suggestions.
在下认为, 如果你能采取以下措施,将是一种明智的选择。
In my personal opinion, it would be wise of you to take the following action. 中间
It should be a good idea to do……做……是个好主意 You can also do ……你也可以做……
I think it would be more helpful if you could do……我认为,如果你能做……很更有帮助 In my personal opinion, it would be wise of you to do….我个人认为,你做……是很明智的 I were you, I would do …… 如果我是你,我会做……
结尾
I believe you will take my advice into account.我相信你会认真考虑我的建议的
I will be more than happy to see improvements in this regard.如果这方面有所改善我会非常开心的 I hope you will find these suggestions useful我希望你能觉得这些建议有用
I hope you’ll make great progress in …我希望你能在……方面取得进步
I would be ready to discuss this matter with you about further details.我准备好和你进一步讨论这个问题的细节
作文:
Dear Li Hua,
I hear you are hesitating whether you will stay in America or go back to China after graduation. So I’d like to give you some advice.
I suggest you e back home after graduation. Firstly, it is not easy to make a life in the US, especially for a graduate, and you should work hard to live on well in a big developed country. Besides, if there is something bad that occurs to you all of a sudden, you have few family or friends to support you in a foreign country. What’s more, our country has been developing a lot and is in need of qualified people apparently. I believe you will have a bright future in China with what you learn in the US.
In a word, both our country and we wele you to e back.
Yours, Wang Wei